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typically i don't particularly care for the stories on adultfanfiction but this one was an exception. or is. i just really want to find out what happens next. which also reminds me.

you suck.

i was totally SO CLOSE to being late to work this morning because your story had me up ALL NIGHT reading it and then it distracted me while i was supposed to be getting ready too. my eyes were hurting so bad on the way to work early this morning. i was like camaro i really hate you. but it all worked out in the end and it's not like i'd prefer to have not read the story, GOD no. i wish that i was reading it now, but NO it has to not be finished. write me more story?

Ahh!! Such a teasingly short chapter after such a long wait! *pouts* Quite the cliffhanger there. I feel so bad for poor Goku :( Despite the cruel chapter ending, you did a wonderful job, as usual. I hope to read more very soon!

O.o OMG...YAY for the story being back! (Vegeta's just a cliff hanger.) :P


Uh...I certainly wouldn't have survived the things Goku has had to go through (actually, I am surprised he's still alive...obviously, Kakarott has a plan...I can't imagine it's for any other reason). I can't imagine what's going to happen next, but I am looking forward to the next chapter!

OMFG... What is there to say? The story is not even finished, yet I can say with confidence that it is one of the best stories I have ever read. It's a DBZ fanfic for christ sakes! It's not like the silly little love stories you read on AFF all the time. It actually has a point that any avid reader who knows anything about books would enjoy. The themes are so far beyond simple animes and cartoons that I wonder why you chose to write this in the form of a fanfic. The ideas are something that are repulsive to think of, but absolutely true nonetheless. I just can't get over how deep the story is. You are an amazing author and should not limit yourself to the confines of AFF. You truely have what it takes to be a great author. I can't wait to see how finnish the story, so keep up the good work!

Just when i thought it was going to be all lovey dovey you make the story so much better. I love it

Well, I would normally comment on the actual content of your work, but since you went out of the way to bash me for something as simple as a misunderstanding, I'll skip the niceties and tell you to grow up and mind your own business. <-< I forgot to write the damned description. So get off my ass and stick your own shit from now on.

ROGUEFURY

Yes! Chapter 11 is here at last!!! *Throwing a mini-party*

“What beautiful world awaited someone at the very peak of drug induced intoxication?”

Good question!! I have honestly always been curious about the reactions people have to hallucinogenic drugs. Not enough to try them, of course…

“Christ, I think I felt like the most selfish person in those moments.”

Not the most selfish person. I don’t think he’s anymore selfish than most people. He’s just not perfect.

“She loved you, you know," I told his back, looking downwards. "We've always known that."

You know, I’ve always thought that. It just seems a little obvious to me sometimes.

“The same with Piccolo and all the others that tried to stop me.”

O_O!!! Not Piccolo!!!! Damn, I like him. *Pouts* So, Bulma IS dead?? *Confused*

“How can you destroy a man that cares for nothing?”

Ah, but no one cares for nothing. He cares for his vision, doesn’t he?

“Me? I'd fight to the death and love every minute of it."

Hmmm… he really does remind me of Vegeta.

“It also brought to light a very acute understanding that I really felt no shame in being so abrasively turned-on by him. We'd always been obsessed with mirrors and reflections; it would make perfect sense that I constantly caught myself admiring him.”

LOL!! Absolutely love this!! At least he’s honest with himself.

“And then my eyes bolted open as I was ball sack-kicked with the realization that this was so comforting because it was what I had done with Vegeta so often.”

Poor Goku, he has no idea what a rebound is, does he? Is it a rebound? It seems that way sometimes, but it also seems to be deeper too.

“Yes, every single inch of my body (yes yes, giggle, every inch, snort snort) was screaming that I wanted this.”

OMG, that was sooo funny. I started choking…

"So tell me," He breathed, tracing my face with his fingertips. "beautiful stranger. How long do you intend to keep your secrets from yourself?"


Ooooo… I was wondering when that was going to come up!! I mean, he has to be in that cell for a reason, right? BTW, HOT!!!!!!!! *fanning frantically*

Thanks for the lovely chapter Camaro!!!! These are always worth the wait :)

This was an absolutely amazing chapter. Their lives have deviated so much from each others, they needed to know how much alike they still were.

In some ways, knowing the other so well is good, but there are complications to it, I am certain.

Really slacking in my review time...

So, Goku and Kakarott are now face to face...and a bit more. Wonder how far this will go before Goku comes back to his senses...or even if he will...

wow...kakarot is a little on the wierd side. and i bet goku is feeling slightly odd for being so attracted to himself. not that i blame him, haha. this story is getting better and better! can't wait for the next one.