rate_review Reviews

Aww.... I was really hoping Gohan and Mirai would find a happy ending together...

I am very sad to see that things didn't work out like I had hoped, but then...this is/was a very good story.

I liked the added plot/idea of having Mirai thrown into this period of DBZ, it added a very nice twist.

Nicely done!

OH no! How much of Miria's power will Buu absorb? Vegetto had enough problems with Buu as it was. EEK!

Those two chapters were SO sad... but I'm so glad that you updated, I haven't checked for an update in a while, but I really hope things get better... It's just so sad right now...

Wow...very intense and disturbing. Poor Gohan, not only does he have to deal with Miria's betrayal, but his own body's as well. And when he gets himself together to struggle one last time, it's still not enough.

Vegeta and Trunks sacrificing themselves, and that still didn't destroy Buu...I do wonder what will happen, if they are giving to chance to help out in the real world, will they take the opportunity?

And Gohan, even after what has happened, he's struggling through, and still training to defeat the enemy. I hope...when this is over, he will give himself time to heal. Both emotionally and physically. To continue with the battle, even after what has happened, takes a lot of strength; even if he sees/saw himself as weak...

It's gotten so sad... That was such a good chapter, as was the previous. Mirai and Gohan both seperated before the tornament thinking of the other and slightly doubting the love the other feels... It's really passionate. The reounion was sad as Mirai held Gohan as what hew thought for the last time.. And now dealing with a demon in himself. Hopefully they can both get through it and still hold on to each other. Really good AU twist having both Mirai and Vegeta becoming Bobbidi's mind controled slaves. Mirai's jealous nature has made him a target to possession.

This chapter skipped a bit when it went from Miria\'s POV to third person POV suddenly.

That asside, you did an excellent job in getting them all to Bobidi\'s layer and having Vegeta and Miria possessed.


Poor Gohan, I don\'t think he really knows what he is getting himself into.


Update soon!

OMG...This HAS to be Bulma\'s way of punishing Miria for Trunks having gotten into his stash. Poor, poor abused demi-sayian.

Gohan has to be blind or something. *shakes head* I never did care for the outfit. What is it with Bulma and putting men in outlandish outfits? And WHY do they subject themselves to it?

The next chapters are going to be very interesting..... @.@ Can\'t wait to see how bad/funny it gets. Will the two of them continue in those outfits for a while, or will Mir\'s fashion sense get the better of him before it goes to far?

Wow... I\'m so glad that I\'ve managed to find this story again... It\'s been a while since I had read it and I had a lot to catch up on. For a while there I didn\'t think that you were going to update after like chapter 11, and then with aff thing not working for a while, I had forgotten the author name to this story and finally found a link to it... I\'m so glad that they finally got together and that everyone is accepting that. For a while there I thought Mirai would be dead *gasps*... Suspenceful, ne? Anyways, I\'ll remember the link and to keep checking for updates periodically. Thanks again for the story...
~daisy

Uh-oh...Miria is in deep s**t now. I am glad to hear he thinks little Trunks is going to be okay. I do wonder about him taking Goten in the room, but I suppose there is a plot device there somewhere I don\'t see.


Thanks for the update email!