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for The Greatest of These

by Nik

person Tora
schedule April 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE your story \'The Greatest of These\' !!!!!!!!!! It\'s a great idea, though very sad too. I wanted to cry in so many parts from the pain and sadness that Duo, Wufei, Sally, and every one else are going through. I\'m not the biggest fan or really a fan of any type for Relena and Heero pairing, but your story made it okay for them to be together. I like that. Usually a story can make me like a pairing I already don\'t like and sometimes even hate.

I can\'t wait for more on what happens in the plot. I hope Duo and Wufei get together. They need and love each so much. And Quatre and Trowa\'s daughter can come back from her kidnapping event and live a happy and normally life. Well..as normally as having two gundam pilots as your fathers can be. *smiles*

Tora
person Devious Lil Devil
schedule April 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*squeals* that was too sweet. beautiful work. now if only thoose two would stop being stubborn and admit how they feel, they can have moments like that everyday.
person FirePeleKa
schedule April 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Meep! O__o

Okay first off, good concept. I like how you’re presenting the “life after war” idea, and how that often times manifests in a “baby boom” so to speak. It’s a very cute idea for the G-Boy’s (although the biologist in me is going, AAAHHH; overpopulation *rolls eyes at own stupidity*). I like your story, even if it seems like 3 separate stories all interlaced. Your writing style seems very similar to Robert Jordan, with the layering of various plots and sub-stories within the main concept. Great writing, but slightly disconcerting when you’re bouncing up and down going: “I don’t have that many chapters left, get back to Duo and Wu Fei, hurry, hurry, hurry!” =P
Otherwise outstanding story so far and I can’t wait for your next update.
person MeLaiya
schedule April 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am still loving this, its definately come a long way, please update a.s.a.p. and keep up the good work. Oh, and my favorite line so far...

“I love you,” he said earnestly, “I adore you. Leave your husband and run away with me to Bora Bora. We’ll change our names, get tans, and have wild sex on the beach every day.”


lol, I frikin love it. Keep it up and update soon.

TaTa
person Devious Lil Devil
schedule April 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is really Really good. i love all of your characterizations even Relena! which is saying smething cause i cant stand that chick most of the time. 5x2 is my fav pairing from this series and we don\'t see enough of it here on this sight. needless to say, i eagerly await your nest update. ^__^

~Devious
person MeLaiya
schedule April 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ooooo, I am so loving this. I really do hope you update a.s.a.p. Cant wait for the next chapter

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