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January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Gerland and Brayen...
This is the exactly of mistake that make me wonder if author care about they story or the reader.
If you cannot bother writting the name of your character the right way, I would not bother reading your story.
This is the exactly of mistake that make me wonder if author care about they story or the reader.
If you cannot bother writting the name of your character the right way, I would not bother reading your story.
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September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awsome fic, keep them coming !
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September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww please continue soon! this story had me hooked from the begginning!
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April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story. Hope you continue writing more, most of the people just leave their stories mid-way which is annoying and sad too. Good luck with the rest of it.
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April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
so far this story is good , but your english is well... theres alot of errors ... anyways i still love your story !! haha
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April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
first of all: Thank you for updating!! been wanting to read this for some time now. ^^
and second. I don't know what to say.. this chapter was so sad I cried through the entire thing.
I love the way you write, it makes the characters and the scenes seem so real. Don't ever stop!
and I can't wait for next update :D
and second. I don't know what to say.. this chapter was so sad I cried through the entire thing.
I love the way you write, it makes the characters and the scenes seem so real. Don't ever stop!
and I can't wait for next update :D
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April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey :)
It's a brilliant story, so I hope you will update soon. and of course get your personal thing fixed.
I know how had it can be, if your life isn't in order.
It's a brilliant story, so I hope you will update soon. and of course get your personal thing fixed.
I know how had it can be, if your life isn't in order.
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January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hello, i vote for another chapter because the story is so interesting.
bye
bye
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December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'd like another chapter! *__*
Take you time! ^^
BeyBye!
R-chan
aka Hoshisaki
Take you time! ^^
BeyBye!
R-chan
aka Hoshisaki
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December 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awww man...when are you gonna get to the good stuff? lol. i guess im just anticipating a gettogether that won't be happening for a while yet. -sigh- when will they realize that they REALLY like eachother? and whats the deal with the change in personality with the gang? was it meant to be that vague? i mean i got the hint that it had to deal with Biovolt...but...eh watever, im sure you'll clarify. continue soon!