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person voyer
schedule August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
as always it was good but the time it takes for you to write the chapters is a but too long. But all in all it is a brilliant piece of art. You are a magnificent writer.
person Anon
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
plz plz plz update soon!!!!
person Anon
schedule July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
^^ yay! finally it's up.. i so totally loved the kaxrei moment.. more kissing!! ^^;
person Vitality
schedule July 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hy, I really like this chapter ^^
Especially the scene with kai and ray. The tension was amazing.
The kissing scene ^////^was very cool, too.
And about Balkov, i don´t like this guy but i think the story will be even more exciting, because his part in the FF is still unclear...
I can´t wait for the next chapter.
Please update as soon as possible ^.^
(sorry, I´m german so my english is not very good ^.^;;;)
bye-bye ^.^ö
person Vitality
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hy, I really like your fanfiction.
please update soon ^.^
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh boy... I hope, nothing bad will happen during the perfomance o.O
Great chapter, I'm waiting for the next one(s)^^
*pokes Rei hard on the forehead* Stop lying, Neko! ò.ó
So.. Looks liek Kai's having certain feelings XD
Can't wait! Update soon, okay??

BeyBye!
R-chan
aka Hoshisaki
person kabi
schedule May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you just have to continue writing it's such a great story dont mint the grammar not everyone is perfect in grammar but the story is great this the first time time that i read a beyblade yoai story and i didn't getup till i finished with the story. plz continue am looking forward to it nice job
person ChinchillaFox
schedule April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg omg omg!!!! it took me 2 days but i finally cought up on reading this great story! you said you didnt get many reviews and i didnt have an account for this fanfiction so i made one so i could comment on this wounderful story! omg! its sooo great and i looove it soo much and its all getting sooo good @///@ i really hope Rei and G-man can get along really after what Rei said to him at the resturant ;~~; i was like..."oooh noooo!" -sighs- anyway i cant waaaait for the next chapter so i do hope you upload it soon! or i might have to bug you until you do mwahahaha hee hee ^ ^ -hugs- un nya! work hard and never give up! ^.~
person TakaoKai
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey!
Please continue with this fanfiction.
It's really good and I LOVE it :)
Can't wait to next chapter.
Best wishes from your new "fan" , Izely :D
person Anon
schedule April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
what do you mean no one reviewed i reviewed i am your biggest fan.
PLEASE UPDATE SOON....I'M ONLY GIVING YOU TILL NEXT FRIDAY....YOU SHOULD HAVE SOMETHING BY THEN!!!
PLZ AND THANK YOU!!!!

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