rate_review Reviews

Awesome addition to your story.
I like how your writing has punch and humor to it. The characters are nicely portrayed. Ronin was really brilliant in this chapter. I loved all his interactions with Rei. The real good part about this chapter is how you mingled humor in all that happened. It's one of your strong points are a writer.

I have no idea why you say this is not one of your best, I thought it was priceless! XD


Update soon!
Tina

Hey there,
I'm review the first chapter of your fic.

I must say, I think it's really great. I loved it. The way you set up the story makes the reader curious for more. You have this knack at sucking the reader into your story because you thought up an interesting plot line. Uh huh! Writer quality #1 is to have a beautiful imagination, and you have it. As for your style, your biggest strenght is description. You really set the scene nicely, and the reader can completely visualize what's going on. you don't skim on the details, and that makes your story almost palpable. Mucho congrats on this!

I'm going forth to review the rest! XD

With love,
Tina

Whoo-hoo, I'm on part two!


I loved it again! You get better and better, huh? Talented girl! XD
In this chapter, we get a good feeling for your main character, Rei. You really develop his personality well. I think it's often hard to give the right personality to a character in a story like this, but you've managed this perfectly! I love how he interacts with the other Beyblade characters, it's very sharp and funny, and I can't wait for more! Keep up the good work!

See you on the next chapter (lol! XP),
Tina

well this story is good i like it very much. . . but there is a prob in this story, some of your grammar is incorrect and so many wrong spelled words. . . so please check it again, but none the less the plot and the flow of your story is ssssssoooooo gooooooooood. . . please update it soon i will be happy to read it again and again. . . and please don't get mad at me, im just a concerned reader. . . peace man. . . V(*^__________^*)V

:D i sure look forward to the next chapter... you're such a good writer.. :) i love this fic sooooooooo much..

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!IT'S CUTE.PLEASE LET THEIR BE MORE KAIREI ACTION !!!!!!!!UPDATE SOONUPDATESOONUPDATESOON!!!!

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!IT'S CUTE.PLEASE LET THEIR BE MORE KAIREI ACTION !!!!!!!!UPDATE SOONUPDATESOONUPDATESOON!!!!

aaww man u just had to end it there didnt u but i guess i should be grateful that u finally updated. this is one of my most favourite stories and u have really improved in the last few chapters although cause of the huge gap i had to reread the last chapter a bit as id forgotten some of the story which sucked.why dont u post this story on fanfiction.net more readers go there and it will get a wider response.wooohoo some kairei action FINALLY although i cant seem to understand ppls fetish with aking rei a pushover ,oh well.ur a good writer and i hope garland and brooklyn get hit by a speeding train and have their heads squashed the idjits.neways just please update soon kay.it makes the world go round...i swear.

YOu know there is just one thin that is bothering me. If Rei was falling asleep wouldn't his hands become lax since his muscles are relaxng? Also there was something about him having his shoulder dislocated unless he's so shocked that he doesn't feel the pain just yet. Other than it was an awesome chappie. Poor Rei he never gets a break. I wonder when a little bit of light will be shed upon him since it seems only darkness seems to surround him at this moment. Anyways please update soon. See ya.

YAY!!!I LOVE YOU!!!XD U updated,awsome.please update as soon as u can.i love your story.please more KaixRei fluff.:puppy eyes: