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October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Tooo vague to actually be enjoyable. I had to make up most of the scenes in my head for myself.
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September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Needs help with the puncuation in the very last sentence and some grammar mistakes here and there, but definately a story worth reading. I really enjoyed the way you put this together, very nice. ^^