rate_review Reviews

What a great one-shot, I liked it! Great plot and so was the character portrayal. And the fic itself was also very well written! Well done!

This was very well written. I really liked the idea of Envy following Hohenheim to the Elric's home as well as him liking the idea of being the oldest sibling at first. It was a very original idea. I think this could have passed at fanfiction.net, I've personally seen much worst (in the content). It's hard to find Envy centered fan fictions anywhere, let alone ones with good plots ir that are well written so this was a nice surprise. The title choice was very good too. Keep up the good work.