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August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was a great start hope you update soon
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May 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Man, I had tears in my eyes reading this.
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May 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hi um that was really good but what you said about not being able to make more parts you could turn it into a yaoi and say how roy learned of what happened and noticed that ed was still affected by it andd he tries to console him but ends up falling in love with him and to end you could say that roy returned the spark to al\'s eyes... just a suggestion but i think that you could do it... i\'m not so much a complete story wrighter but i can give you some more ideas if you want.. littlekatiecat@yahoo.com or kathrynbaker2002@yahoo.com.... i really think that you should do more.... your choice though... awesome job!!!
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April 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg that was awsome. Please you have to come up with a plan and finish. YOU MUST DAMN YOU!!!!!