AFF Fiction Portal
GroupsMembersexpand_more
person_addRegisterexpand_more

rate_review Reviews

for Patience

by Pixelgoddess

person Zofo
schedule October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was unexpected for ChiChi to visit him, and very touching that she would want him to be happy with whoever he loved.

So glad Goku finally overcame his fears and they connected minds. Now he can truly understand Vegeta's feelings for him. Hopefully he will finalise their mating now.
person Chichicken
schedule October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, you have no idea how happy it made me when I found out there had came out new chapter!
It was so amazing, again. You even made me like Chi chi for a while (I usually...well, hate her) and you discrabed Goku's feelings so well... just keep going!<3 you do great work!
person kitkit
schedule October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love it, i just love it
schedule August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay An update! I was on pins and needles wonderin what happened to Goku. Update soon I'll be readin ya!
schedule August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy Goku has come back to Vegeta. This chapter is HOT. *nose bleeding*. I need an ambulance soon. Or a cold shower. Keep writing I want to know what happens next!!!
person mcdgoddess
schedule August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!!! I'm glad to see Goku getting through some of his problems. Thanks for the update!
person Zofo
schedule August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Phew, he was only sleeping. Loved the banter at the start of the chapter, it was funny and kinda sweet at times.

Aww, the anniversary meal was very romantic, Vegeta really tried, bless him, and Goku appreciated it.

I liked all the teasing in the lemon at the end, nice to see them so comfortable with each other, and I hope Goku completes the mating soon as they are really content now.
schedule August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww, Vegeta remembered their anniversary ^.^ Seems like they're taking a step in the right direction here as far as moving toward a completed bond. *crosses fingers*

I almost NEVER read fics involving Goku as a seme to Vegeta because authors tend to butcher the characters so horribly, but I find myself actually able to read your semeGoku lemons :P Take that as a HUGE compliment!

Awesome work, as usual.
person Anon
schedule August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You know, I quite like this story. It's got a very interesting plot and the character development is just wonderful. There is depth but also some light hearted moments as well. The lemon scenes are very nice, though I tend to stay away from them (mostly because they make me blush and writer's kinda tend to overdo it) but I do find myself enjoying yours.

I'm really looking forward to the next installment. Thank you for creating such an enjoyable story.

Love always,

Talitha.
person kitkit
schedule August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
me love

Age Verification Required

This website contains adult content. You must be 18 years or older to access this site.

Are you 18 years of age or older?