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Ooooo what's wrong?! What happened?! Update PLEASE!!!

I hope he is just getting some sun....or I'm in line for a breakdown! Great story!!

That's shocking news that Goku will die if he doesn't complete the bond, and will take Vegeta and the cub with him. Why didn't Picollo say something earlier as time is almost up! No wonder Vegeta gets so annoyed with him. Surely they have to tell Goku soon, better to be alive and still unsure of the bond than to be dead. I do believe Goku wants to complete it deep down inside.

Was very comforting for Goku to talk to his friends and family in his dreams. Must be Dende's doing as it seemed more real than dreams. Just what he needed to reassure him. The talk with the old woman helped too I feel.

Sad that Picollo can not feel other Nameks, but at least he got to experience love, even if he didn't have time to act on it. However, Gohan didn't seem to think his death was an obstacle when Goku told him. Will he be visiting Picollo's dreams?

You left it on another cliff-hanger! Why is Goku stretched out in the glade? Has he collapsed, asleep, or something more disasterous? I need to know!

This chapter is very gripping. I am glad kaka has thought it through in 5 days time. Otherwise I think vegeta will be crazy.

Life goes on. It is such a truth. I also like gohan's positive reaction when mention piccolo.

Look forward to next chapter.

Phew that was a close call! Poor Vegeta was so distraught, but I did love the scene of him wrapping himself around Goku and forcing him to live.

I get the sense that time is running out for Goku to return the bond and worry that if he doesn't it will mean the end of both of them. I hope his trip away will make him finally accept it, though Vegeta will almost worry himself to death when he's away from him.

*sneaks in* I saw the update at home before I left, but I didn't have time I read it.... but I couldn't wait until I got home so I snuck the chapter in at work *snickers*

Awesome chapter too! The cliffhanger of the last one left me so much on edge.... and the cliffhanger at the end of THIS chapter is no better! Gah! I love the emotions and confusions from all sides. Vegeta is really going to want to kill Piccolo now though. He probably thinks the Namekian told Goku to ditch him.

Dun dun duuuuuuuun!

I eagerly await the next update. Reading your fics keep me inspired to update my own. There aren't many people writing anymore :( Keep up the fantastic work!

oohh god this is getting so excaiting :O I love the way you create characters' thoughts and opions ^^ looking forward reading more!

OMG! Poor Goku...Please update soon!!!

ARGH, I come back here to find 2 new chapters, and then you torture me with an evil cliffhanger!! >.<

OMG he died! Nooooooooo! Hope you have a way out of this *pleads*.

Felt so sorry for Goku, he's missing his friends so much. I think thats the reason he hasn't returned the bond. Maybe he can't take the pain of losing Vegeta as well.

Vegeta must save him and the cub somehow!