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This story is so hot, hot, hot! Peppered with such sweet moments, I feel sorry for Goku not being able to feel Vegeta in his mind but look forward to when he does.

Hope there's more soon.
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OMG! SO GOOD! I can't believe I almost missed this! Isn't it great when your one-shot turns into something totally and completely AWESOME!! OH YES! SUPER AWESOME!

You write SO well, I could FEEL the anger, I could FEEL the passion, it was JUST SO GOOD!

I think my favorite part (besides are the smutty goodness) was Piccolo's "I'm asexual" comment. I laughed. It was great!!

Keep up the awesome awesome work! Until next time! ^_______________^

god the sex scene was so intense

Hi, I enjoy this story line! Could you give me a heads up when the next chapter hits? Thanks^-^
J-chan

love it

this is absolutely splendid! i really enjoyed reading it. goku, vegeta, and the others were kept in character so well. there was no pretentious dialogue, superfluous use of adverbs (that really rubs me the wrong way, though i'm guilty of it sometimes...), and you actually made goku pitiful without making him some pathetic, frail angel! he was so weak, i felt sorry for him, but i was happy to see that he still had some fight in him. the bit with picollo carrying him over the shoulder was hilarious! i love how you've handled the characters. i IMpatiently await more! :D

Kakarott even blamed himself for his sons’ deaths – like it was his fault for being a Saiyan. Vegeta had gone through the same pain, and understood, but he had no real regrets – Trunks had been one of the best things in his life. How could any of them have foreseen that the cost of their phenomenal strength was the rapid burn-out of their all-too-human bodies? At least he could sympathize with his mate in this – and remind him that as a full-blooded Saiyan this child would not suffer the same fate.

~~this says much..tells the story of what happened to their kids and explains why Kakarott is soo upset. And Vegeta has his quirks and fears too... yes you are truly the Mistress of Mayhem... Angst is everywhere... and if anything happens to either of them the other will truly be left alone...

that would make an interesting side story ...or chapter...the loss of their sons...but that paragraph said it all...

LOVE IT!!!!!^_^

YAY!!! They are finally TALKING! GAH! I think I might know some of Piccolo's frustration with the situation. hehehehe, I'd have carried Goku to Vegeta also. :P

Excellent chapter Pix!

Oh I wanted Kakrott to wake up... As always, Love it!

oh yay, its been a long time since i've seen this. either i've been out of the loop or there have been no updates. it was a great chapter!