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April 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm not usually a Vegeta/Goku fan, but this was beautifully handled...I really enjoyed the awkwardness, the patience...and the use of that required line at just the right spot.
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April 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
How did I miss this story? You've handled a very complicated situation in a deep, touching way...plausibly, too. I'm loving the love triangle, and I really hope you don't abandon it in future chapters; it's a rare complexity that I don't get to see a lot of anymore. I love this story for that reason; so many complications dealth with so well, and so much attention given to character.
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December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i loved it are you gonna write more chapters i wonder what the baby will look like
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November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very, Very well written chapter! That totallt caught me off guard with Piccolo, what a twist! I hope the two Saiyans have an eisier time with each other! I love this fic, please keep it up! :)
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November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was adorable. Smexi too. Please update as soon as possible. I'll be waiting! ^^
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November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hi there,
it´s a good story and i especially like the explanation, why vegeta didn´t say that he "loves" kakarott.
i would even say, that it´s a little bit philosophycally in a way if i thought about it.
so keep it in on. ^^
take care.
greetings, Bijou :3
it´s a good story and i especially like the explanation, why vegeta didn´t say that he "loves" kakarott.
i would even say, that it´s a little bit philosophycally in a way if i thought about it.
so keep it in on. ^^
take care.
greetings, Bijou :3
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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Happy little fyre, glad to see more... but 12 months! I thought nine was too much!
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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah, Piccolo...I wonder if that was really what he had in mind the whole time, or if he had a back up plan? Either way, it turned out the best for Goku and Vegeta, and yes, Piccolo is correct, until Vegeta got to the point he wasn't thinking about it any more, the prince wouldn't have said anything.
Excellent chapter Pix!
Excellent chapter Pix!
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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow im glad goku know where him and vegeta stand..hopefully everything will start to look up
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November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
“I’m asexual, you ass. I’m not going to have sex with anyone.”
Hilarious I love Piccolo!
Hilarious I love Piccolo!