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July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
godd it's good. UPDATE!
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July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
EX-CELL-ENT!
This really is a fantastic story, I had been waiting ages for a second chapter to it. I had faith, however, that you would come out with one.
It's not often that you get a story where Bulma stands up to Vegeta's mistreatment and actually follows through with it without having sex right afterwards. I was really hoping she wouldn't give in, and she didn't. I thought that was great.
This is an awesome story, please continue. It's so different from the rest and your writing style is fantastic. Please do continue.
This really is a fantastic story, I had been waiting ages for a second chapter to it. I had faith, however, that you would come out with one.
It's not often that you get a story where Bulma stands up to Vegeta's mistreatment and actually follows through with it without having sex right afterwards. I was really hoping she wouldn't give in, and she didn't. I thought that was great.
This is an awesome story, please continue. It's so different from the rest and your writing style is fantastic. Please do continue.
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July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Amazing story. I love stories like this. I hope you keeping writing on it. I'm looking forward to reading chapter three. ^_^
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July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What a great beginning! I love how Vegeta personality is so on point and that things don't start out all lovey dovey. Please continue on and update soon!
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July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i have to say i really enjoy your work update soon k ty