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This is one of the best GxV fanfiction I've ever read. Mixing SM with DBZ is a brilliant idea considering how strong these men are. They can take quite a bit of pain-but then in the end it was too much even for them. Macha found their limits and made this very long fanfiction a hell of a ride.

Third time reading and I feel my skin tickling like it was the first first. Thank you for writing!

Mann..I LOVE this story..you are an amazing writer. I found this story on pixelgoddess' page..n it wasn't finished on there..so I was so excited when I found it on here. yay! I can't wait for the next part..my f**ked up lil prince..wow..how sexy! Damn this story is sooo good..I haven't read the whole thing yet bc I've got to go to class..but I'm so excited to finish it :D You're such an amazing writer..the way the words flow..n set a perfect picture in my head is awesome. So very awesome! I can't really find words to describe how good this is..I mean it's beyond awesome..n anyone who says otherwise..is an idiot. lol So, just keep up the wonderful work :D

This is another one of those fics that I read when I was new to the fandom, before I had anything like name recognition going on, and before I started bookmarking the ones I liked. At the time, it definitely squicked me a bit, but it stuck in my head. I've always seen Goku and Vegeta as having a bit of sadomasochistic relationship, for obvious reasons, but as I've been writing my own stuff, I keep getting just a little bit more extreme with it, and when I do, I'm often reminded of this fic (that I could never remember the name of!) So, quite happy to find it again, and to discover after all this time that it was one of yours all along. :D

I didn't care much for the scene with Kakarot, but it was fascinating, so I kept reading....and wow...watching Goku come to grips with what he had done, and the fact that Vegeta wanted it, and then watching him come up with the nerve to do it himself - THAT'S FUCKING HAWT! I thought I was going to gasm when Goku started breaking Vegeta's fingers! Sick, I know....

I already read the sequel (just now - I hadn't read it before, for some reason - squick?) but I commented here, because IMO, the magic is here.

Love you Macha!

Wow. That was rough. I'll admit this took me longer than I thought to read because I had to break every now and then and come back.

Vegeta is the little masochist here isn't he. And who would have imagined Kakarott would be so good at analyzing the situation. A little more than Vegeta bargained for I do believe. I so want to hate Vegeta for what he's done, but I can't. I'm not sure why, but I can't And I feel so bad for Goku. He's lost everything.

It wasn't an easy read for me, but it was a very good story. On to the second part.

Amazing work, as usual Macha darling. I look forward to reading the next installment. Also, i need your help reviewing the last chapters for poisoned hearts. I finnaly finished it and i just need the chapers read over.

Hot sex on a stick. So hot it brought tears to my eyes. Macha, you are my goddamn hero. This is one super hot fic. Do you think you could pull off an incest version? Goku and Gohan Maybe?

Awsome first part of the story, can't wait to see the 2nd part of this series! :D

Wow O.O

I've just finished reading the whole thing...and wow. You pulled this off pretty damn well O_O

*waits for sequel/has nothing really interesting to say*

Applause!! Great story. It is really quite amazing and I'll be looking forward to the second part. Great writing as usual and wonderful in-depth look on the characters. I loved it!

You know reading this story in my parent's kitchen was quite the challenge...but I made it all the way through! Well worth it! I really enjoyed this fic. I'm not a huge Goku/Vegeta fan but the way you write pain made me take the plunge. Very well done. Kudos.