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aw im sad that its over, but i can't wait for the next one! vegeta really has some issues to deal with, but it gives the story a good twist. i'll be checking for the next one!

Wonderful. I love the presentation in your story. The feelings and thoughts of the characters are so tangeble. I lood forward to the next update.

wow this is getting deeper and deeper, vegeta really is messed up eh? can't wait for more! yeah im a greedy freak.

Ohhh..this story is too good, haha. I really like it and I really really like the conflicts in both saiyajins. As Goku had said before "Vegeta is one sick freak." The poor abused guy is so...confused. It's sad that his past tormenting has led him to this dangerous obsession and it's even sadder that Goku is dragged into it! Well...again an awesomely detailed and descriptive chapter. I can't wait for the next! Great stuff!

Wow! My words of praise would suffer in comparison to your writing style. Loving the squicky masochistic nature and the bare gruesome tones this fic has to offer. Even I was cringing at some points, but it adds wonderfully to the affect. I love the blunt honesty Vegeta has when describing his lusts for a violent domination and the in-depth way you named all the bones and joints as they came into play. You certainly know your biology!
An absolute must for updating!
Eagerly awaiting future chapters.

Is there more? There must be more! Please please update?? I just *knew* Kakarott would stop him from being able to talk... Anyway, I am enjoying this (more than I should be, perhaps... O.o) Anyhow, I still want to see them talk about it and see how Vegeta explains himself. You are an awesome writer, please update this soon!

I think it's brilliant how you describe this obsession of Vegeta, this sick masochist inside of him.
Though I have a problem every time I read a story about this duality Goku-Kakarot, the dissociation of one personality from another. It's difficult to believe that after all his experiences and having developing his own strong personality, this other side, 'Kakarot' the real saiyan could remain inside of him. Certainly everybody has a dark side that can resurface from time to time,but I can't agree with the idea that this personality, 'Kakarot', is fully intact and can split so easily from the real Goku. And, besides, I don't know if the real Kakarot would have been such a monster.
Anyway, I can accept it as an excuse to develop such a brilliant story.
But now Goku has an unpleasant dilemma. How can he cope knowing that there's such a twisted, wicked being inside of him? And how will that change his relation with Vegeta knowing that the prince has awaken the beast? I want to know how you will solve this, cause it's very interesting.
(Sorry if what I have written doesn't make sense, english isn't my native language and I don't know if you have understand what I've wanted to express)

Ok....oh...my...GOD, this story is soooooooo amazing, I am totally in love with it. Wow...just wow...I just need to get some adjectives to explain this story out of the way and then I can normally review...ok: Brilliant, amazing, perfect, heart-pounding, moving, gripping, sheer awesomeness!! Well...now that that's out of the way, I really love this story. Your writing style is great and you make so the reader is totally in the story and feeling all the anxiety and fear the characters are experiencing. I loved the hypnotist scene. One truly realizes how clever Vegeta is...but then again not, because he had no idea what he was getting himself into. Trust it to Vegeta to truly want something badly and then have everything go wrong. Kakarotto...wow...evil evil guy. And you explained the torture and pain so well! Thank you for that. I loved the details and descriptions of Vegeta's building panic, his struggle, and realization that his idea wasn't the greatest one. I am also amazed by the way you kept the characters so...in character, haha. Vegeta was perfect and you kept him so in character. Rational thinking never left him and he tried to hide his pain. Such a strong character. Poor Vegeta, I felt so bad for him. Poor Goku, too. How confusing to wake up and find Vegeta in that condition. How awful to find out that he was the one who did it! o.O So yes, I can go on and on. Details, descriptions, and altogether writing style was great and I'm definitely watching out for the next update. Wonderful, great stuff!

Wonderful! *spork* Get another chapter out.

Everything was so well described and visually enticing. Keep it up.

So interested in this. So interested.

Update soon!