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June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ewwwwwwwww...It took me a second to figure out who the last man to leave was, but after that...I HATE HIM! That's icky Mr. Evil-Guy-Who-Needlessly-Kills-Sweet-People.
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December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Unbelievable. You're a talented writer and you shouldn't stop here. Great diction :)
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July 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's not often I read a story consisting of mostly sex just for the plot, but this one was so good I kept reading it. Please update soon?
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June 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!! That was awesome! The first and second chapies got me so damn horny I was tempted to call my boyfriend over here right then! The third chapie GROSSED ME OUT!! I fell fast... the ending though ^.... lol... Write another soon ,but for now I\'ve gotta go call my boyfriend...
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June 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is a good story. i think you should make a nother part about ed and roy working things out and them falling in love and stuff.....