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January 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it.
Short-ish, but for this type, a decent length. And well-written.
Short-ish, but for this type, a decent length. And well-written.
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August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
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July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is really good. Very sexy, and you characterized Lust well. I like how you ended it with Envy finding her.
~Trinity
~Trinity
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July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*whoa*.. that was hot. It actually really bothered me in the series that "Lust" never seemed to be particularly lustful.. this was a really great answer to that particular question-- I really loved the way you painted Lust's character. As with the rest of your stuff, I really loved this fic.. keep 'em coming! <3
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July 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I thought it a shame that such a well-written PWP about Lust had no reviews yet, so here's one from me.
I found Lust's performance very erotic and quite in-character. An insightful look into a character whose full potential was sadly frustrated by the show's refusal to delve into sexual issues despite its willingness to flirt with issues of violence and gore.
I did find the references to Wrath, Sloth and Greed to be a tad confusing, but then the story seems to be set well before the Elric Brothers made the scene so I suppose that must have something to do with it.
Overall I give this story high marks. Short but satisfying. Two thumbs up. :)
I found Lust's performance very erotic and quite in-character. An insightful look into a character whose full potential was sadly frustrated by the show's refusal to delve into sexual issues despite its willingness to flirt with issues of violence and gore.
I did find the references to Wrath, Sloth and Greed to be a tad confusing, but then the story seems to be set well before the Elric Brothers made the scene so I suppose that must have something to do with it.
Overall I give this story high marks. Short but satisfying. Two thumbs up. :)