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December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
0_0 That was fabulous! <3 I totally was not expecting that one.
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October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is great..It make you wanna see if there's a sequel...hehehe...Good Job!!
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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dude(tte)... I really like the ending. XD This was a pretty good story, probably better than mine.... but then again, there are alot of stories out there better than mine. Meh... anyway, I liked it just fine. :) (:
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June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You're right in one thing: it's crappy.
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June 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ok i thought that was funny...... yes it was a little bit sick but it made me laugh anyway.... thats some pretty good writing
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June 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh, that sneaky Winry! She has BOTh brothers on a string. And who knew Alphonse, sweet, gentle, NON THREATENING Alphonse was such a Casanova? I hope you will update this, wouldn\'t it be funny if they found out about each other? Ummm, maybe not, Edward is certainly the type to get jealous. But wouldn\'t he be relieved to know he doesn\'t have to grit his teeth and stay quiet anymore?
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June 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it. That last little bit with Al\'s got me giggling. Wicked little Al... ^_^ This was a good story. Short... but really good. Keep writting. You know what they say about practice...
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June 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This was short. I hope Al would last longer than that. Maybe with a guy... ^_^
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June 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, the saying goes like this: practice makes perfect. C\'mon a rabbit fucks longer than this.