rate_review Reviews

Vegeta's hands began to glow. "You..._pervert"_ he hissed, raising
his hand. "I should burn you down right now-"

Still funny as hell, I see. Man Im loving this story.

...I actually read this story a little while ago and at first it was fine and everything...it got a chuckle or two out of me even. But then after I got deeper into it, it started to get a little stupid. How Goku and Vegeta acted towards each other made my stomach churn.

"Oh when we touch like this,"

"I know," (Or however it went) Marked the end of the story for me...Sorry. You're definitely not a bad writer though. This however was not one of your good pieces. Now with this said hopefully I will not see a flame from you on one of my review boards or email inbox. Good day!

Clap clap clap! I salute you!

I\'ve read a lot of fanfics in my time and I just thought that you have the characterization down to a T.

I really enjoyed your story. Keep up the good writing my friend!