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Look, I don't know HOW this fic only got 2 reviews. People must be blind to extremely orgasmic fanfiction or something. God Damn, Woman! I have NEVER read a Vegeta/Kakarot fic so hot in all the years of my life!!! Superb job, out-freaking-standing! My goodness! I drooled. Literally DROOLED! And would have bled rivers if I had that much blood to spare. You, Miss Hoshi, are a yaoi lemon princess! Ode to ya!

^_^ Awesome work! There were too may things I loved about this fic to choose! Vegeta's emotions were played so keenly, like his irritation at the start, his devastation at Kaky taking away his treat, even the desperation near the end and the pleasure throughout. Adored the spanking snippet(EEP!).
A wonderful piece. Keep on writing.

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