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Nice story!

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very good!! please write a follow-up chapter!!please!!

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i knew i'd read this before, and i almost didnt click, but i was pretty boerd so i did and now im wicked glad because that was pretty damn hot and awesome, and so in character. im not sure if i remember how the other one was worse, but this is definitly solid now.
*sends love*

This is a lemon, not a lime. you seemed confused at the top as to which it was. a lime has kissing and possibly second base. If it's something that a person under 18 cannot legally view, it's a lemon. Any variations for the names of sexual organs fall into that catagory, and a scene where someone has an orgasm is automatically rated X, a lemon. Under the shirt touching is lime, exposure of breasts and defined as lemon. IE, no children under 18 allowed according to the internet porn law.

This story is kinda cute. I liked the flirting idea, except where you had to explain the only things that kept Ed from flirting with the whole office, meaning that he had tried before, because that made him come off looking slutty. Ed is rather modest by nature as far as looks goes. talent he'll flaunt, but he's kinda self-conscious when it comes to anyone besides Al touching him i've noticed in the manga. Even Ling freaks him out a little.

But the writing is good. :)

hi! Thank you for reviewing my fic. I just got into Ed/Roy, thank you for writing that:D I will read the others ya did too.

Awesome. Very well written.

You so totally cater to my FMA OTP. *grin* Keep producing the Roy/Ed slash, and I'll be one very happy girl.

A little short. I would advise a little more detail in it all, stretching it out. LOVE ROY AND ED!! (Perfect for each other if you ask me) Love the story, hope to read more from you!!

So nice....you just love torturing Ed, don't you? Well, I know how it feels to want to torture a cute little bishie. My torture is usually dark and sadistic, though... er, anyway... good job, once again!