rate_review Reviews

This scenario struck me as very in character.
Tucker was immoral enough to use his own daughter
for experimentation so I could see him very capable
of this type of behavior. Hughes, Ross, and Mustang
were also very realistic. My favorite parts of this story are
Alphonse's endearing concern for Nina and Edward fiercely
(and very vocally), defending himself.

"Note: "Draught" is the British spelling of "draft". Why do they spell so weird? I dunno. Go figure. "

Note, the language was developed in Britian. It is hardly our fault if illiterates populated your country now is it?

It was... Okay. I don't understand where the 'implied incest' was.

You know, this story was strangely compelling. I like how the child molester was in fact, treated as such - a child molester, a danger, and a big problem. And poor Ed, freaking out :( Will there be any more to this story?

Hello!^^
I really enjoyed your fanfic.You know, i love dark themes like rape, shota-con, non-consesual sex and stuff, so i liked a lot the story of your fanfic. May i ask if it will have, later, a chapter which Tucker gets what he wants from Ed? XD And Ed will be willing or not? Hope he will not, it's more interisting! \^^/ Or maybe a chapter where Tucker shows just how much he wants to defile Ed... well, I kind of hentai, as you can see! X]~~
That`s it. Good luck on your fanfic!