rate_review Reviews

OMG, you've done it again, you've completely blown me away with this amazing one-shot of yours! Seriously you're one of the best FMA fanfiction writer ever. I loved everything about it, the plot was brilliant and so were the characters description, I kinda fell in love with your alternate Envy, the name Ivy was a brilliant choice btw, and I more than loved Ed and his relationship, it was so damn cute and sweet and sexy! I also liked the Ed and Roy's relationship, just not as much given the fact that I consider myself as a hardcore Ed/Envy shipper, oh well...

All in all I totally adored it, well done on an amazingly good story!

I just read your story and I loved it. It can stand on it's own. Well-written. Loved they way you plotted the story. Time difference was handled well and I think that the time change is a big part of how well your story comes across. Good luck on the future and I think you should continue to write you have a talent for it.