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July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i really like this. i hope you update soon. is there going to be any smut in this story?
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July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Heh shopping, cute! Okay loving it loving it! And Roy named her tammy!!! HAH HAH i would have guessed more of a cathy look. XD Anyways great chapter can't wait to read more. ^_^
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July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holy cheese and crackers, this looks interesting! I can't wait to read more.
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July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awww...I like how Ed is smart enough to keep his mouth shut cause Roy thinks he's a girl. And Al being with him, and being his primary concern, makes me very happy too. Ed tucking the armor piece into bed with him is the sweetest thing ever. As is Roy making sure the poor kid gets enough to eat, awww...
More please!
More please!
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July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, poor Ed...though I'll note he's only keeping his cover so well if he's opting for more guy clothes than girl clothes. Also, what happened to his voice? Inquiring minds want to know...
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July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi there ^-^
I'm agreeing with the lot, this story is developing really nice so far. You're getting better and better ^-^
There were several typos in the first real chapter (e.g. "Havok" or "Meas") and the story was a bit clouded (like that red herring with Riza), but the next two chapters convinced me and took me in ^-*
Good work, I'm looking forward to your next update!
*kisses* sillk
I'm agreeing with the lot, this story is developing really nice so far. You're getting better and better ^-^
There were several typos in the first real chapter (e.g. "Havok" or "Meas") and the story was a bit clouded (like that red herring with Riza), but the next two chapters convinced me and took me in ^-*
Good work, I'm looking forward to your next update!
*kisses* sillk
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July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Unique and interesting idea. I've enjoyed the first few chapters and am looking forward to more.
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July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well this story is very interesting and you got my attention. So please keep it up and i cannot wait to read more. ^_^