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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is great writing. The pace is good, I didnt notice any typos or grammar slip-ups, its neither too bare nor overly-detailed. It just flows naturally. Amazing job!
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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Man, this story is really getting to me. I love everything about it. Finding a good, solid RoyEd fic isnt as easy as I first thought it would be. Apparently, the fandom is bursting with mindless, cheap drabbles. Im falling in love with you. HEhehe.
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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Finally, some contact. I was starting to worry that Roy was getting too comfortable playing the dad role.
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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok, this is getting a bit too...domestic. IS this AFF.net or family hour? Bring on the HEAT!!!
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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*whistles* That was NOT how I anticipated their first time to be. I'm still kinda in shock.
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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, thats an awefully gutsy move: killing off the original cast and replacing them with faceless names. Roy's spooking me out as well.
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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, you're really good at this. I've never read a Roy I didnt like. This one takes the cake, this dependent, baby-ish psycho creeps me the hell out.
By the way, I forgot to thank you for vetoing the Roy/Al notion. That wouldve ruined everything for me, going this far into your story and would have had to drop it. THANKS!
By the way, I forgot to thank you for vetoing the Roy/Al notion. That wouldve ruined everything for me, going this far into your story and would have had to drop it. THANKS!
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September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Tht story was just AWESOME!
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August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was a sweet ending.
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August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I don't know what to say appart from "ILOVEYOU".
Seriously, have my babies. This was an awesome fic and your amazingly talented. I must say, best one of read in a long, long time. Thank you for the hard work and time you must have put into this, it was definetly worthwhile. You actually had my eyes watering in a chapter or two.
Seriously, have my babies. This was an awesome fic and your amazingly talented. I must say, best one of read in a long, long time. Thank you for the hard work and time you must have put into this, it was definetly worthwhile. You actually had my eyes watering in a chapter or two.