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August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad that Roy didn't take advantage of Ed :( And noooo, Roy, don't go off to war! *hopes the Elrics fix themselves and go haul his ass back*
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August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! So short but ack i am dying to know what shall happen now!! I call that an evil cut off evil! Great chapters i loved them all and i cannot wait to read what will happen next. Update soon =3
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August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG... o_o. You are officially a GOD. I shall worship you for the rest of my life. Your fic just gets better and better and the suspense... damn it's killing me by slowly melting my brains *damn nose bleeding again*
Please update before I run out of blood. ;D
Please update before I run out of blood. ;D
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August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is such a good story, original idea, good characterization, pretty much everything. Thank you for the fast updates, too.
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August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww...in a certain light, I'm glad Roy left them for a bit - it gives the boys some time to grow up without him as a father-figure, and now that he needs help, he and Ed can be on more even footing. Though I'll admit, a part of me wants to see Roy/Al here too XD; Also, it's so sad for poor Ed - the way you wrote the sex between them, the reader can really see and wince at the prior abuse :( Glad he's finally had enjoyable sex.
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August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sorry i haven't left a review for awhile, i've been grounded :( this isn't the end right? you still are going to do a lemon for us? oh i put my last name because there is an author on here whose name is michell.
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August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aaaahhhhhhhhhhhh, you titled that chapter "leaving" because you were leaving "faithful readers" on the edge of a cliff. Damn, that was good. I hope you keep writing forever!
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August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh! Poor Roy! Poor boys! What will they do? Will they sit idly by and wait for Roy to come home? Or will Ed take the State Alchemist test and go find the man he loves? Oh, the trauma! *sniff, sniff* I LOVE IT! Thank you so much for the updates. I anxiously await more, so please update soon!!
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July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awww so cute! Kittens how cute! Oh man both Ed and Al are so cute, them playing like little kids, so cute loved this chapter! Update soon =3
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July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
My gawd this has got to be one of the best fma royxed stories i've read so far. I love it!