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Yippee, Ed is beginning to speak! I'm so glad I don't have to wait weeks and weeks for updates. Thanks!

OMG ... that teacher need a good ass kicking ... *kicks him out the window* Poor Ed. *grins* But Mustang handled that very well, I was actually hoping he was going to beat the teacher into a bloody pulp but thats ok at least he got him in trouble.

Your the greatest ... you write an amazing story and you update faster then anyone. *glomp* Keep up the great work k. ^^

Great chapters as usual. I check my computer almost 10 times a day to see if you've updated your fic. It's just amazing.

Great chapters! And omg first i was like gah Roy getting 'happy' during that cute little helping him with his headache thing, i was like Roy yes Ed has the magic touch. LMAO! I have no clue what i am ranting about, and omg when it came down to dinner with Mandy gah! She was such a rude woman! Marriage hah! Sheesh girl you in denial! Okay sorry for my ranting that does not make sense at all. Keep it going ^_^ update soon.I love how caring Roy is in this story. Sigh what a man....

Hi there!

Ah...I haven't time to check your story lately and what nice surprise!
So many new chapies! *huggles*

Yup, yup, you're definitely getting better! ^-^
I think compared to earlier, your range of vocabulary really improved, as well as your grammar! (Although I’m not exactly the person to judge, what with my crappy grammar and such *laugh*)

Splendid! ^-^

...But....awweee.....I so wanted to see the reaction of Hughes, Havoc, Riza & Co at the revelation of "It's a boy! Gaaah!" *laugh*
Hmm...maybe later in some flashback or something the like?
I'm really a sucker-up for WTF-reactions... ^^;;

Oh and...hmmmm...I’m not getting the impression that Roy & Co thinks that Ed using alchemy via handclap is something like "WOAH! Never saw something like that!", although it IS. In fact, they seem quite nonchalant about it.
Truth, they are astonished at the power and complexity of his (and Al's) alchemy, but not at the WAY he actually use it.

...At least, that's the impression I get and...that somewhat....bother me.... ^^;;


......oh well, that's that ^-*

Once again, good work! Keep the update flowing! ^-*
Your domestic Roy is absolute adorable! *laugh*

Bye and nice regards, sillk

I must say your writing style is simple and to the point, but also fluid. Your story flows and the pace is such that you don't notice the length; you just go with the flow. And the flow just carries you through a wonderful and simple story. No homonculi (I agree, too complicated). The relationship between the characters is totally believable, especially the way Roy is trying to habdle the situation with such traumatized kids. Anyway, great job. I'm really enjoying your story and simply can't wait to see what happens next, especially, between Roy and Ed.

Love ya, just love ya for writing such wonderful fic :)

Awwww that's so sweet :) I'm glad to see Roy punished himself for breaking the rules, that makes things feel a lot more even. If he's not going to pull mitigating circumstances for himself, I have a lot more respect for him. And I like the fact that the boys have a routine they like, and things to look forward to, and well - a life :)

Hehehe, and now Hughes gets his comeuppance. I really love how adorable the two brothers are together, they work perfectly as a team and can raise some serious hell XD Absolutely cute.

Two chapters and both great! And OMG Roy asking such questions and inviting a woman over!! GASP!!! Well i cannot wait for next chapter update when you can. =3