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July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like this story more and more. i feel so bad for ed. i wonder how mustang is going to react when he starts having feelings for ed.
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July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this has to be the only story that i am enjoying on this website. i read sex ed teacher by sky dark on another website. and yes her writeing is greatness. poor roy, trying so hard to be fair but not trying to let them get away with anyhting.
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July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Running torture!!! Sorry i was never any good at running laps so when i read that i already began huffing and puffing. XD Great chapter and take your time with each of them there is no rush. *Is rocking back and forth in the corner mumbling to self* no rush no rusn.
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July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this fic. You actually had me beliving Ed was a girl. Keep up the great work and update fast ... I'm on to chapter 2. ^^
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July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*_* I am in love with the Elrics building clay forts. That's exactly the sort of thing I can see them doing - like the time they tore up a street having a childish fight XD Also, love for Ed refusing to stop when he needed to. Poor Roy, having to spell everything out. And Roy gets to hear Ed's ruined voice! Love...
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July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O.O Wow, you're fast at updating! I read one chapter, leave and come back in a hour and you've already updated! Now why couldn't other author's be like you?
This fanfic...is wonderful. I can barely put into words how much I like this story. I honestly have to say this is one of the better fanfics I've read since I started reading fanfiction 4 years ago. Keep up the good work! ^___^
This fanfic...is wonderful. I can barely put into words how much I like this story. I honestly have to say this is one of the better fanfics I've read since I started reading fanfiction 4 years ago. Keep up the good work! ^___^
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July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
To my utter delight not one but several new chapters. Your story is building itself wonderfully. Thank you, thank you and oh yes I'm still loving the story!
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July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
an up date :D i just read chapter 7 a half hour ago. i really like this story. is ed going to be talking soon and does he join the military?
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July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
<3 And now you have my heart, because you have Ed terrified of Armstrong, who does in fact come on too strong and seems very threatening. I love him making tablets out of the earth to communicate - a nice touch, how one can use alchemy in creative ways. And I am glad to hear this story has a hold on you because it has a hold on me too, and it puts a bounce in my step every time there is an update!! :DD
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July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...and I just realized it ate my review, stupid affn. At any rate, in a nutshell? This story is brilliant. More specifically, you have my heart for Ed being afraid of Armstrong, and for Ed's inventiveness with alchemy, and for Roy scritching Ed on the head and talking him down. Very nice, and I positively can't wait until the next chapter :O