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Short review but i shall say Love it!! Update soon. ^_^

I just read your story, and I love it, To see Edward as someone more hesitant fragile, it's an intersting new look! I also like how roy is being careful with him as well, though it was slightly frustrating (not that it was wrong, just that I was antsy, lol) to have Roy continually think that Ed was a girl, and Ed not correcting him I was thinking to myself come on Roy, figure it out already! I think your story line works well, and I look forward to seeing what develops between Ed and Roy. ^_^ I can't wait to see the update, and good luck to you!

First--I just have to say that I utterly love this story. Second--I have to say that you are absolutely AWESOME for updating as often as you do!Okay, that's about it. Can't wait to read more!!!

Wow, per usual your latest chapter is amazing *fangirl dance*. Can't wait for the next chapter (as usual).

poor ed. but roy will begin to like guys XD probably already does and won't adimt it.

And he has been founded. Oh wow i was like "OMG!" heh heh but glad Roy found out and he didn't really freaked out. Roy is so nice,i love how you portray him in your sotry. ^o^ Okay can't wait for the next chapter, keep up the great work. ^_^ Update soon!

Hey i love this story so even though there is not smut or anything big like that it does not bug me cause this story is good and cute at the same time. Weeee can't wait for the update.

yay! al has a body! well a metal one anyway. wonder how roy is gonna react when he's told that the elrics were a pair of brothers. i foresee loud screams and things being thrown in the next update. j/k. see ya next time.

I really like this story! Angst!Ed. My fav! (Combined with RoyxEd it makes it perfect!!)

Now, on a slightly less giddy note, I really like how you have managed to make this story progress. It flows really well and seems to be put together very well. It's not too choppy or too wordy.

I do wonder, though, is Ed going to talk to Roy in the forseable future? I'm glad that he knows that Ed is a boy, though. (Whew! About time!!) :)

Keep going - I look forward to the next chapter!

Aww, the secret had to come out sometime! Glad they got this over with early. And I like him establishing ground rules for Ed, that he doesn't have to trade sex for anything. Poor kid, he's gotta be so fucked up :(

One thing I thought you might clarify, have Roy give a nod to the fact that these are abused kids - setting rules is certainly important, cause it makes life feel normal again, but at the same time you'd think he could acknowledge the fact that you know, they aren't exactly used to being treated like people. They hid Ed's gender because they were trying to go along with what they thought he wanted...and he is trying to emphasize specifically that he is disappointed they didn't trust him enough to talk with him, yes?