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Aha, and the plot thickens! I like how Roy is in fact checking up on their background, and how Al feels bad about lying, and how Ed is slowly starting to warm up. Also like that Roy is being less of a bastard - he's actively considering "Tammy"'s feelings now (giving her personal space and so on). And well, as long as he keeps feeding them noodles and books, it looks like they're on the road to recovery...

*is eagerly awaiting the day when Roy finds out Ed's true gender :O*

To my utter delight I see another chapter of Housework! Yippee

"Roy got a glare when he didn't interfere and felt it was best to give a lecture as well, except his was more along the lines of don't get caught. As a reward for his wonderful parenting skills, Roy got extra paperwork that afternoon and had to leave his door open to ensure no slacking." - Oh that was so funny and clever as well and soooo like a man.

Read your bio - it's hard to believe you've been writing for a few months, you obviously have a gift. Thanks for sharing!

P.S. "original" in quotations IS a good thing!

This is so good. I can hardly wait for Roy to find out that "Tammy" is actually a boy. The pacing of this fic is good. You don't give too much away at once, but it still holds my interest. Also, thanks for the frequent updates.

i really like this story. how is roy going to react when he finds out tammy is a he?

an update Xd i know about being tired. i know i will be once i get a computer n my house and i'm typing my own stories. this one is really good and interesting.

So cute i love this story. can i call it cute? I mean Roy thinking Ed is a girl and the way Ed is i mean being all quiet and cautiose makes it seem so cute! I can imagine it! Gah love it. And yay Al has a body to move now in. Update real soon i cannot wait to read more. =3

Awww, that's so sweet - I like the idea of them combining their alchemy to give Al a body again! Please please write more, I come to this site to read this story now!

Another good chapter (5). Wonder what's going to happen now that Al has a body? I really like your "original" idea story. Caon't wait to see how it plays out. Thanks for the quick update. As for housework - now I gotta go do mine.

Very interesting, I quite like this story. I hope you stick with it. I'm looking forward to see how it plays out.

P.S. Correct spelling is Havoc and Maes

holy crap, this is great. but you may wanna put some space between paragraphs to make it easier for your readers.