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for If Only For a Momemt

by EternalTwylight

person Onitsu
schedule May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay another chapter! I still love your writing style. But i gotta say sorry 4 not updating, my net's turned off atm. I'll update asap. (I'm relyin on my phone for net access) XP
person Onitsu
schedule April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. EternalTwilight your writing style is so intelligent. It's amazing. I really love how you phrase everything. It seems so deep and only those of a higher IQ would be able to interpret the subtle nuances of your paragraphs telling of the deeper feelings of your characters....either that or I'm just reading way too deeply into it :-P
I hope you continue soon. I'll try to get the new finished chapie of my story asap. :)
person Onitsu
schedule April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOOHOO! Heh, hot monkey lovin. Oh ET you're EVIL! You took a page out of my book and put in a teaser! XD You're awsome!
Oh gods you mentioned a capsule labled 'emo' YES! That's so freakin sweet! But is it "baby bat emo" or acctually goth mislabled as emo (yes there IS a difference)? Thats the question. Oh, and I cant remember, was Bulma smoking at this part of the series? Mmm...Bulma in a fishnet top, and tight black leather mini skirt w/black thigh highs and mm...knee high lace in the back corset combat boots. (I saw them on hot topic. Great place for the modern 'emo' look.) Oh and thanks for the new review on my DBZ a la manequinn. (I do have another story on this site in the Phantom of the Opera section that's done if your interested. It's called Scarred Love.)
Keep going I'm looking forward to what you have in store for our Saiyajin prince.
To coin your phrase, MUCH LOVE!
lol ^_~*
person Onitsu
schedule April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*re-reads the chapters* Every time I read this I am impressed. I acctually check everyday for updates. I've been having some serious writer's block as of late. (But reading other people's stuff makes my muses wake up and start my creative juices flowing again.)
person Onitsu
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
MORE!!!
I love your writing style. Please update asap.
person mitche
schedule September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like it u should continue.
person PoisonGirl
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You need to write more of this NOW!!!!
person TristalovesVegeta
schedule July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You're an incredile writer. Very poetic, please continue writing this story, it's awesome!
person Kitty
schedule July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please, please, please finish this fic!!! I thought I would die!! That is SO what I want to do!! Aki is soooooo lucky!!! Keep going, pleeeaaase!!!
person iris
schedule July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hi
i love the story
vegeta is soooooooooooooooooo hot
please update soon

what i realy like in the story is that she told her friends she wanted vegeta
i dare not even to talk about vegeta infear of my few friends hating me
oh wait my friends just left me so i dont have any...
oh well...

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