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January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like the approach this is taking. Is there any possible chance it will actually continue?! It's always the fics I want to read that are incomplete...*sigh*
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July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
more please!!! it's really good =]
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May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey
i don´t want to ctiticise you, because english isn´t my native language and definitly not my strong point either, but i like your story and something struck me as rather odd
my native language is german, since i´m from austria, so i thought it odd that treize told the dog to ´steig aus´, but then i saw that you wanted to translate the command ´get off´
you are right, ´get off´can mean ´steig aus´, but it holds the context of getting off of a bus or something like that, not really a command meant for a dog, in that case you would tell the dog ´geh runter´or rather ´runter!´or ´aus´
´geh runter´can be literally translated as ´get off´, ´runter´as ´off´-i think it would be the most appropriate, seeing as it perfectly works withmy own dog - and ´aus´means ´stop´
they are rather common comands in the german language for dogs
i hope i wasn´t too obnoxious and i didn´t want to intrude, but it rather irked me, like an itch you can´t scratch
sorry, i hope you´re not mad, i just meant to help
i don´t want to ctiticise you, because english isn´t my native language and definitly not my strong point either, but i like your story and something struck me as rather odd
my native language is german, since i´m from austria, so i thought it odd that treize told the dog to ´steig aus´, but then i saw that you wanted to translate the command ´get off´
you are right, ´get off´can mean ´steig aus´, but it holds the context of getting off of a bus or something like that, not really a command meant for a dog, in that case you would tell the dog ´geh runter´or rather ´runter!´or ´aus´
´geh runter´can be literally translated as ´get off´, ´runter´as ´off´-i think it would be the most appropriate, seeing as it perfectly works withmy own dog - and ´aus´means ´stop´
they are rather common comands in the german language for dogs
i hope i wasn´t too obnoxious and i didn´t want to intrude, but it rather irked me, like an itch you can´t scratch
sorry, i hope you´re not mad, i just meant to help
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August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I quite enjoy how this story is progressing. It has been quite some time since
I have delved into reading Gundam, as most seem to lack.. substance.. characters with
no real depth or personality. Of course this could be said of many 'fics' floating about..bah.
The pace of your story.. the characterizations, amusing dog names(Holy Roman Emperor indeed heh),
and notes with -research- *hearts and stuff*.
Er.. needless to say, I'll be keeping an eye on this story and wishing you
with good health.. and a healthy dose of whatever gives you inspiration.
I have delved into reading Gundam, as most seem to lack.. substance.. characters with
no real depth or personality. Of course this could be said of many 'fics' floating about..bah.
The pace of your story.. the characterizations, amusing dog names(Holy Roman Emperor indeed heh),
and notes with -research- *hearts and stuff*.
Er.. needless to say, I'll be keeping an eye on this story and wishing you
with good health.. and a healthy dose of whatever gives you inspiration.
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July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i really did like this and hope to see more.