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November 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was quite a compact little lemon in that first chapter
I can tell from your other fanfics that you've developed them no end =)
I can tell from your other fanfics that you've developed them no end =)
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April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
God your story is great please go on complete the story its a wonderful and great story. You really out done yourself this time
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February 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
first of all: ^______^
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.....*blink*blink*
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*BLUSH*
:D !!!
whhhhhhhha wow!!! ^O^
donīt know, what to say! errrh, well... nothing but: ---> thatīs just amazing!!!
noone ever did that for me!!! *-*
THANK YOU SOOOO MUCH my dear!!! ^3^ *hug and kiss*
yahhh, i think iīll copy it now and show it proudly to everybody i know, like : "look, she wrote my name - MY!-right there! right above the chapter, you see that? yīknow what that means?????? *smirks like a maniac* Yes! you got it! she dedicatet to me!" *giggle*
again: thank you very, very much sara!!!!!!
*dance and sing* :D
well, but now i wanna comment the chapter. ^^
uhhh, how i loved the part, as geta sent his ki into gokus abdomen
and the baby reacts. that was so cute and the imagine of the baby with the little thumb in his mouth was either! iīm knowing what iīm talking about, because i could see it in my mind. *grins*
and as you already know, i love the way you describe their feelings with so much emotional deepness and sensetivity!!! ^^
itīs just like dreaming in the whole story and see it like my own movie- strip in my thoughts. i love to dream away, and iīm really proud and much more very thankful and just happy, that you dedicatet this chapter to me.
*hugs and kissī you senceless*
*smirk*
thanks!!!!
canīt wait for the next chapter!!! keep on writing hun!!!
Bijou :3 "Saiyanprincess" ^.~
Love YA !
:)
....
.....*blink*blink*
....
*BLUSH*
:D !!!
whhhhhhhha wow!!! ^O^
donīt know, what to say! errrh, well... nothing but: ---> thatīs just amazing!!!
noone ever did that for me!!! *-*
THANK YOU SOOOO MUCH my dear!!! ^3^ *hug and kiss*
yahhh, i think iīll copy it now and show it proudly to everybody i know, like : "look, she wrote my name - MY!-right there! right above the chapter, you see that? yīknow what that means?????? *smirks like a maniac* Yes! you got it! she dedicatet to me!" *giggle*
again: thank you very, very much sara!!!!!!
*dance and sing* :D
well, but now i wanna comment the chapter. ^^
uhhh, how i loved the part, as geta sent his ki into gokus abdomen
and the baby reacts. that was so cute and the imagine of the baby with the little thumb in his mouth was either! iīm knowing what iīm talking about, because i could see it in my mind. *grins*
and as you already know, i love the way you describe their feelings with so much emotional deepness and sensetivity!!! ^^
itīs just like dreaming in the whole story and see it like my own movie- strip in my thoughts. i love to dream away, and iīm really proud and much more very thankful and just happy, that you dedicatet this chapter to me.
*hugs and kissī you senceless*
*smirk*
thanks!!!!
canīt wait for the next chapter!!! keep on writing hun!!!
Bijou :3 "Saiyanprincess" ^.~
Love YA !
:)
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January 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love it
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January 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh, amazing, and i have to say i like where you're taking this and how you're taking it there. Dealing with Goku's and Vegeta's emotions and writing them down in an explainable way is extremely difficult. I found it easiest just to say that Goku is a Libra and Vegeta is an Aries, Trust me it works.
Amazing chapter, my heart implodes when i read stuff that makes me think and feel. So thank you, even though it kind of hurts, it's a good thing
Amazing chapter, my heart implodes when i read stuff that makes me think and feel. So thank you, even though it kind of hurts, it's a good thing
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January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
More please! This is too cute of a fic to let go. :]
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November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hi there, ^^
i think it isnīt boring. not at all. even if pregnancy isnīt the newest thing around here.
but actually, you wrote it in your own way,your very own style and with that it isnīt anything but boring.
i also think, that because people donīt feel like write you reviews, doesnīt mean anything. - or you shouldnīt get worry about it. if YOU think by yourself, that your story nedd changes, than i would change something, but not just because people donīt reviewed. as i said, i donīt really think that it meant something.
errr, okay, now my true review! ^__^
first of all i wanna say, i really like that arale appeared and that sheīll help them through pregnancy. it was very funny, that vegeta have to run the tests, either. but i think it was a big help for goku that his prince agreed to do it. ^__^
and the way you describe the feelings and thoughts of everybody, esspecially gokuīs is very, very well!
oh, and i like to read, that goku is smart and not the naive big baka, in your story! itīs interesting and just nice to read how he behaves. but poor namekian. i think heīs a little bit confused, after goku said him blunt to point that he has no chance to win, if he would fight the prince. even if iīm sure piccolo already knows that. to hear it from his old friend and decorated with vegetas grin it is just...ummmh...
really. poor piccolo. *g*
so. youīve done a great job again and iīm looking forward the next chapter.
bye. :)
i think it isnīt boring. not at all. even if pregnancy isnīt the newest thing around here.
but actually, you wrote it in your own way,your very own style and with that it isnīt anything but boring.
i also think, that because people donīt feel like write you reviews, doesnīt mean anything. - or you shouldnīt get worry about it. if YOU think by yourself, that your story nedd changes, than i would change something, but not just because people donīt reviewed. as i said, i donīt really think that it meant something.
errr, okay, now my true review! ^__^
first of all i wanna say, i really like that arale appeared and that sheīll help them through pregnancy. it was very funny, that vegeta have to run the tests, either. but i think it was a big help for goku that his prince agreed to do it. ^__^
and the way you describe the feelings and thoughts of everybody, esspecially gokuīs is very, very well!
oh, and i like to read, that goku is smart and not the naive big baka, in your story! itīs interesting and just nice to read how he behaves. but poor namekian. i think heīs a little bit confused, after goku said him blunt to point that he has no chance to win, if he would fight the prince. even if iīm sure piccolo already knows that. to hear it from his old friend and decorated with vegetas grin it is just...ummmh...
really. poor piccolo. *g*
so. youīve done a great job again and iīm looking forward the next chapter.
bye. :)
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November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! After coming on here like five times I finally got to finish reading chapter 14! I love that they have someone to help with the pregnancy! They seem like they are in good hands! Poor Piccolo seems to be keep getting hit with Goku's strange actions. :) lol I can't wait to see what you come up with next!
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November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love it love it i can't wait for the next chapter
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November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Keep up the great work you are doing fine I love it. Just keep going for the 19 time i Cant stop reading this story I have read it over and over and lost precious fic writing time myself