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October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*he would put his hands together and begin to clap while tears came from his eyes* BRAVO!! BRAVO!!! YOUR PRACTICLY THE BEST WRITER EVER LOL WELL I STILL HAVE MORE TO RED BUT OHWELL YOU COOL A WONDERFUL STORY TRUST ME IF YOU WERE TO ENTER A CONTEST THIS WOULD MOST LIKELY WIN..WELL OTHER THAN COME WITH ME. AND PERSISTANCE ALONG WITH 512
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October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohh..soooo sweet. I love that Goku did that murel and I'm glad that the baby is doing well. I hope that everything goes well for Vegeta and Goku with their little baby. Can't Wait! Great chappie.
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October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aaww so fluffy
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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Um... Nada que comentar. Me han gustado mucho los dos capítulos, aunque ahora sí que siento curiosidad por los demás personajes. Sobre todo por cómo se lo habrá tomado Krilín.
Ya falta menos, no?
Digo para lo del bebé...
Soy como las marujas con lo de la Leti... pero con Goku!! XD
Ya falta menos, no?
Digo para lo del bebé...
Soy como las marujas con lo de la Leti... pero con Goku!! XD
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September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is lovely, please continue the great job.
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September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
(Wipes steam off computer screen) WOW! That was hot! I hope that Goku doesn't start shrinking away and that Piccolo can help the two convince the others that nothings wrong! Update soon, Please! :)
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September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oooohh they finally had hot monkey sex and it doesn't seem like goku regrets it.
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September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awsome! Update soon, please.
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September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You have a great talent at describing emotions and feelings, the relationship of the two saiyans seem so real, you're really amazing. Please, update soon.
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September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I Hope Bulma doesn't do anything to hurt the baby! I can't wait to see what happens next!