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by Tyrana

person kit-kit
schedule September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aaww the perfect mis of angst and fluff
person Irol
schedule September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow bulma is a witch! but i loved this chapter, they're so cute. i like a mushy vegeta.
person Michelle
schedule September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww I loved it!!!! and here i was thinking that the last chapter was the end- Awesome, Awesome, Awesome!! "How the woman could have the impudence to make such abominable suggestion was beyond his comprehension." --- HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHA that was PERFECT- Great job
person Risk
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Genial, como siempre.

No lo he podido leer antes, pero me ha gustado mucho. Entonces, Goku está con un Vegeta pequeñito en su interior? Madre mía.

Supongo que como Goku ya está fuertecillo el niño ya se habrá casi desarrollado por completo, no? Si no no le estaría dejando tanta energía... ¡¡Y ya quedará menos!! Digo yo...

Por cierto, y los preparativos para la habitación del nene? Supongo que tendrá una habitación para él solo... no?
De momento no se me ocurre mucho más para comentar, pero ya se me ocurrirá.
Ah, y a los diez años los besos son un asco. Puagh, normal que Goten no lo entienda...
person kit-kit
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow another wondeful chapter
person zoe
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thats so cute *god I sound all girly yuck* but the hole purring thing is cute. HA HA 50 I think id pass out yay longer than Goku did at the prospect of event 10% of that many children let alone 50.
Vegeta said that Goku got to decided wether he wants to get pegnated as well, did you mean controceptive's or are you going to make the saijns have a mental pregnant block?

as per usual great chapter I cant wait for the next one so plz update soon?
person Kallipso
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It was not that only a person that has been dead with in a year can be wished back. The dragon balls where already used thats why they had to wait a year, Prongoua gives you two or three wishes when you summon him.
person Anon
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far. To answer your question Porunga can revive anyone who has died no matter how long they have been dead. The only thing he can't do is bring them back if they dided a natural causes.
person Anon
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I also forgot to add this to my review. After the Frieza saga the Nameks fix Porunga powers to where he can revive thousands of people in one wish. Watch the Kid buu saga, it shows it coming true when Kibitokai, Dende, elder kai travel to Namek to help Goku and Vegeta.
person Michelle
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think Porunga has basically has the same rules as Shenron but you could always say that when they modified him again(d so that he could bring back more than one person per wish(Dende said during kid Buu saga), that they also made it to where it didnt matter when they died, that is if you needed to use it that way. Nice chapter, things went along well

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