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October 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM
O_O i need more. Love this story. The bulma and vegeta interaction was awesome and not too ooc. did you get a beta reader/prof reader yet? any of the mistakes i came across were not too noticable but i do take my time reading your fic. I hope you consider continuing this story ^_^ thanks
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August 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love the originality of this! It's very refreshing, as well as holding a great grasp of character personalities. Please don't wait too long to update. I am really looking forward to reading future chapters.
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July 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Silverlady....is it really you??? I was so excited when I saw this story at the top of the list of updated fanfics. I've read the first chapter so long ago, it's so awesome to see the continuation. I haven't gotten through all of the new stuff yet, but I know what I'll be doing in my free time. Yay! So excited!
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July 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
What a great beginning and interesting start!
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July 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I like how you merged canon with this story. The characters are spot on.
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July 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Exciting chapter! All three parties are going to come together. And Vegeta is back!
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July 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Very exciting and the plot moved along quickly. Loved the last line. Now Vegeta knows he is dealing with Turles.
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July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was looking for more updates to this story...and I thought, you know, you should let her know you enjoy this story.
So I enjoy this story. So far, it seems like a mature B/V...and I love Vegeta's characterization. Plus it's a new twist on something...that well...is a little hot already for me. XD
But I do like Vegeta a little feral.
So I enjoy this story. So far, it seems like a mature B/V...and I love Vegeta's characterization. Plus it's a new twist on something...that well...is a little hot already for me. XD
But I do like Vegeta a little feral.
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November 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad you are continuing this story, and with so many additional characters.
This should continue to be interesting!
This should continue to be interesting!
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September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This story is amazing and your writing style is awesome! I really love it so far and I'm excited to see why he's here and what had happened. Really excellent! Great work!