rate_review Reviews

This fic is wonderful! very different from other fic's but i like it, great way of starting the fic too. I love when things aren't to obvious, and this fic isn't! This fic has all te possibilites in the world! so please continue

wow I love your writing style. you have me hooked on this story.

Good to see this posted here. And a good number of reviews already. :) Hope more people read this good story!

Please,I would like to read more from you!!!
This is an AWESOME and ORIGINAL story!
Keep up your good work,you can write so well!

Wow...this is really good. I'm really wondering when someone else will wander into this story. But, this makes a great prelude up to something...great? I won't know until you update, which I hope is soon because I am eager to know what happens next. This is really great, I hope you know that. Your writing style is fantastic. I like it a lot, it's not choppy or anything. It's very flowy and descriptive. Thanks for posting this, I like it a lot so far...
Update, too, please!

Well, this is an interesting predicament Vegeta is in.

I wonder who will come looking for him...well, not him, but the dragon ball for certain.