rate_review Reviews

I read this because I read your Kakashi/Iruka over on Naruto. It's kind of funny because yesterday I spent an hour or so reading Ed and Roy tales, but I didn't read this one. I love the dialogue during the sex--I've actually written some stuff amazingly similary in a bunch of my yaoi sex scenes, but I haven't done any with such an age gap. It's cool having Ed as the seme/top here. You've got a bunch of little errors--the story title is missing an apostrophe and they are "two" sinners, for example. But I like your stuff a lot, keep writing!

I really enjoyed it, lots of poetry.