rate_review Reviews

I loved reading this! I hope it gets finished soon. Good job \(^o^)/

Mannnn i loveeeee this storyyy yay! it's sooo great. I love the way you wrote the sex scene..hehe..well the way you write period but the sex scene was just perfect..I loved it...I do believe it was the best sex scene I've ever read. really it was just amazing! When I was reading I felt like it was excately how the characters would act. It was perfect..Goku being shy n blushing..awl..I just love the trust Vegeta gave him..awl it was just slow n sweet n hot n perfect. I love this story n would love some more :D

I really enjoyed this! One of my true favorites. I think the whole idea was great and quite interesting. There so much you can do in the dragon balls and you had awesome ideas. PLease do continue with the story. I hope you will not give up on it, as i seen that happen many times. Waiting for an update.

I am waiting for more of this! I like it very much since it's a little different from the things I usually read. It's kind of an AU but not quite and else, Goku and Vegeta are still in their "sweet" ages, I mean, their facial/body age... whatever... I think I can't explain myself right...

I can't wait for reading the conclusion!!!

One question, I think I saw this fic somewhere else, like... fanfiction.net?

Heehee...I reeaaalllyyyy like chapter 14. After i read this story on ff.net, I knew I had to find this story uncensored. And I am so glad i did. Again, beautiful writing style and wonderful catch of the characters. Perfect. I am so shocked that this story doesn't have more reviews because it really is amazing...and great...and..I LOVE IT! So, keep it up and I hope to see more chapters on this site.