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August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GAH!! I love it! You can NEVER find any King Vegeta and Bardock stories out there! And yours is so well written! I love how you made them act! Makes me feel like I'm watching a movie! And they are so...GAH! I REALLY REALLY REALLY wish for you to update and put another chapter in! It would be awesome! I'll be waiting!
Please hurry!
Please hurry!
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July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this story is great so far, i was upset there was only one chapter so that means you have to make with the second chapter or else...
vageta- huh? you want me to blow who's head off?
me- the author's
vageta- absolutely not, how will i ever know what happens to me?
me- good point
kk, well you get it, next chappie pwease!! soon!
vageta- huh? you want me to blow who's head off?
me- the author's
vageta- absolutely not, how will i ever know what happens to me?
me- good point
kk, well you get it, next chappie pwease!! soon!
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July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sorry guys i'm trying, almost done please be pastient with me i'm not the fastest writer in the world, but thanx much for the good reviews! they sure did make my day. i'll have the next chappie asap! luv ya fans much!
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July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked it, write more please!
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July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
thank you much for being my very first review and making it nice I'll try to get the next chapter out as soon as possible. more reviews and I'll speed up the process, please and thank you!
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July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Omg!! this story is soooo good!!!
Vegeta: aww little me!! i'm so cute.
Bulma: quit bein so concieted!
Vegeta: shut up slave woman!
Bulma: wut did you just call me!!
Goku: okay you guys, break it up.
Bulma/Vegeta: she/he started it!
me: well guys shut up so i can tell her to get another chapter up as soon as possible! loved it, please continue! :)
Vegeta: aww little me!! i'm so cute.
Bulma: quit bein so concieted!
Vegeta: shut up slave woman!
Bulma: wut did you just call me!!
Goku: okay you guys, break it up.
Bulma/Vegeta: she/he started it!
me: well guys shut up so i can tell her to get another chapter up as soon as possible! loved it, please continue! :)
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July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yea...wierd people...great story though!!! i loved it, continue soon.