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This is hysterical. I love the idea of Edward foiling all his sexual attempts with others in an awkward rampage for scientific ventures. Also in love with the idea that Ed is "into" alchemy, heh. It's totally adorkable. Anyway, great work!

This was really well done! I'd really like to see more, if you'd ever like to pick this up again.

Wow, where to start for a review.

First off, I love you for finally quenching my thirst for finding a well written and entertaining FMA fic tonight. I've been in the mood to read some FMA fics late at night again, for awhile, and with all the ridiculous and sometimes appalling fics I manage to find over at FF.Net, I was figuratively dying inside. But after I finished reading this beauty of yours, I was resurrected with glee. ♥;; THANK YOU.

Second, ho'god the characterization. You've done such an awesome job characterizing Ed and Al, I was truly amazed at how well I could totally picture all of this happening. I don't think I've seen such a fine job (a real fine job) on characterization like this before, or at least not in a good while.

Third, I really enjoyed the humor, made me laugh out loud several times. ♥;; The story flowed so well, you're writing is wonderful, and idkasdf I CAN'T THINK OF WHAT ELSE TO SAY. I enjoyed your story so, so, soooo much, it really made my night. ♥;; ♥;; I'm really in awe. :3

Overall, thank you for the spectacular read and I hope to read and review more of your outstanding work. It was truly a pleasure! Please, don't ever stop writing and doing what you do. You have a wonderful talent. ♥;;

Cheers~!
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Okay, my brain just tilted. A *tantric array*? [Blink blink] wow. Poor Ed. Well, it's as they say, your magic is supposed to feel good to you. And if he's getting turned on by doing transmutations now, just how would a rematch with Roy for his yearly evaluation turn out?

Hey! I believe I've read this on another sight! ^^ Still, VERY FUNNY!! I chuckled inwardly too... ^^. :) (:

I've seen the sex toys made for guys in catalogs, but a MATTRESS which will give a hand job, well, that hasn't been invented yet.

Excellent. And I don't care what Al says, Ed's a perv. But a good kind of perv. One I wouldn't mind discussing certain.... er, things.... with.... Er, never mind. ^^

So funny! I laughed through the entire thing. Excellent job!

That 'building a better condom' line reduced me to tears in an instant! I still snort every time I think of it...

Poor, poor Edward! Why do we torture him so...? (Um, because we *can*?)

You deliver, as always, milky!

HAHAHAHAHAHA That was so priceless!!! Loved every sentence of it.