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for Dark of Night

by mistryl

person KamiaKotai
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey,

Sorry I haven't been reviewing. I'm rather lazy right now. -shrugs- But alas, I'm reviewing now. And first off, Tala! How could you! -smacks Talas head-

Tala: -slowly turns eyes and glares- Woman.... -snarls-

-goes on chattering- Anyway that was a very good chapter. Tala was mean as usual, Bryan was sadistic per usual. And how cute he thinks of Spencer as the nicest. And probably Spencer is the nicest because he won his match and has nothing to be ashamed of...lol. ^.^ -random thought- For some reason I still think it might be Bryan, just because at the beginning he said, "Let me Love You", as in it was a change from his normal actions. Do you get what I'm saying?...Kinda like he hurt him...and how on the flip side he wants to love him....very unusual concept but hey. -shrugs- Maybe Kai is his messenger...although it didn't say where they(Demos)were before that...-thinks-...Well I'll let you go before I go into disecting your entire story. -grins- Great job on this one. Nice cliffhanger, I might add. Catcha' later.

-Kami
person bluefyre
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great story!hopefully there's more!
person KxR
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So far so good. I wish you would up date faster though! I wanna find out what happens! I can't wait that long! You should like update today again! -hinthint-
person Katana
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
:cheers: Are we finally going to find out who raped Ray, and then sent him the rose? Hmmm...<< Now I'm thinking it's either Tala or Bryan, even if Bryan would never write something like that, and even though Tala tore the letter up. The big jerks. :gives pointed look to them both: To me, it seems more likely that it was Tala. :shrugs:
person WHAT?!
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WHAT THE HELL?!?!DAMN WHO IS IT.STILL GOOD PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
person LOVESRussianbadboysK.B.T.
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Once again my friend has chosen to call me and review.I would have done it anyway the story is to good not to get a review!Please don't leave me and your other readers waiting to long.Spencer Ray,weird.how come i have feeling that bryan or tala was just acting.though i still think that it's kai.awsome story still.please try to update before monday cause then i won't be able to read and review til i come back from paris.pleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseplease!!
person RussianloverBryanTalaKai
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
поспешите оно вверх угодите!(hurry it please)i like the short poem.
person LOVESRussianbadboysK.B.T.
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
My friend called and told me to review this.awsome.update soon.i seem to have a cold around of my heart cause of my boyfriend.^_~
person what?!
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AHHHH!It's got to be Kai or Bryan.Maybe Tala.Anyways update soon please!^_^i love your stories.
person Arsinen
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Rei *sniff* well anyway awesome that you decided to continue with this. XD You've made me really happy but if the note was written in Russian it could be and OC, Kai, Tala, Bryan, Spencer and probably Ian but I seriously doubt it. So tell me am I warm? Well update soon.

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