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That story was one of my absolute favorites! I loved it! I was about ready to cry through some parts of it. (Try reading Chapters 28 & 29 while listening to Bush's "Letting the Cables Sleep") Anyway, I think that your writing his awesome and some of the best that I've read, as in, not just fanfic, but all that I've read. Pity that you don't get paid to do this. Keep up the stories. Oh, and I loved the ending to this, sweet, very good, it really makes the whole story perfect. Thanks for writing!

Oh this was so amazingly beautiful... It's definately one of my favorite fics out there! Cat!Ed was so CUTE! I loved him! His limited language made what he said all the more significant and the was Roy handled it all was so amazing and Ed was amazing and I could just see it all!
Winry... I never really liked her either, altough I think Hawkeyes character is awesome.
Al was very good too and specially in the beginning I really had to feel for Ed, being both bullied and coddled at the same time by both Roy and Al. Once again, I loved kitten!Ed, he was just perfect but I loved real Ed too. And those rings! That was just perfect in the best way possible.
I think this is very well written. Also liked the part where Ed has disappeared, you can just feel Roys misery. And than to find him and see him badly taken care of as a kitten, even though he knows the boys try as hard as they can, it must've torn him apart to see it...
And- and- and- well there's too much, really. Awesome, thank you.

I found this link on DeviantArt, and I started reading it last night. I couldn't tear my eyes away from the screen!!! It's such a sweet story, so full of love, and even had a variety; angst, humor, and best of all...SMUT! Haha. But really...I adore this story so much!!!

*falls helplessly at your feet*

I luff kitty Ed..... Yes, it's been done before, but not a whole lot... Well.... not well, anyway.

*cuddles the furries*


I'm printing this one out for my little 'Hall of Fame' fanfic shelf. ^_^

*stops talking now*

There's a couple of spelling mistakes, HE, a few run on words, but other than that, very nice. and why is it over?! *starts crying*

I love this. Not LOVED as in not any more but LOVE as in love it now! Wonderful story telling abilities and great references will sometimes make all the difference.

5'6" is only a little less than average height for a boy. At 5'1" however, I do have trouble reaching things sometimes, and I'd be screwed with high shelves if we didn't have stools (or a ladder for my loft bed). I still have to jump to get on top of a stacked bed (there's a pull-out and drawers under it) at home, so 5'1" or 5'3 would be about the right range, but not much higher. Most girls are anywhere from 5'1" to 5'10", so add about three or four inches for the typical-to-fairly-short-or-tall boy. And I liked how you had Ed at 5'1.46" - I keep track of that too. :3 I'm 5'1 9/16", and my family laughs whenever I say it. ^^
Love your stuff; I'll get back to the fic now...

In this chapter you say that Ed clapping doesn't do anything, but later in the same chapter he says stuff happens sometimes, and in the chapter before 'Found' you have: "While Ed didn't remember and had to relearn everything, he could do the same alchemy as before, just by clapping and letting his concentration go. The others were fascinated that he didn't need to understand; things just changed the way he wanted them to. The hypothesis was that he still had his memories but couldn't consciously access them."
It might be a bit of work, but it really does need to be reorganized to explain the discrepancies. Please don't take this as a criticism; one of my favorite authors had one thing at the start of her fic and the complete and total opposite at the end, so it's nothing against you. However, a change does need to occur in order for this to be really completed.

it's been awhile for me but seeing your story always makes it impossible to stay away. thanks

Purely lovely. You've a genuine talent for the craft, and I look forward to reading more of your work.