rate_review Reviews

it was perfect!!!! a perfect ending.. a perfet story..omg i love ed with ears! and a tail! and his cute chew toy squeaky cat!!! i love it i love it i love it! this was such an awesome story! thank you so much for sharing it with us and i hope u contine u the roy/ed writing goodness!

Great finish sorry that I didn'rt reveiw earlier I love the last couple of chapters they where fantastic.

Well, you did it again. Made me miss my faovirte TV shows, kept me stuck to the computer every free minute I get. You're great, really. You can just keep a story going and going and people never tire of it. Even the corny parts are oddly comforting. And though I'd hate to see your talent wasted on a RoyAl of, even worse, an EdEnvy, I guess as you write these really fun RoyEd, its all good.

Yay! I forget to check in to se if you's gotten this finished. good job. V

your story was amazing. its sad thatit has come to an end but I love it nonetheless. you're an great writter. I can't wait to see what you write next. thank for writting this this. it was great. the ending was perfect. I'm just sad that it had to end so you better write another soon! haha. take your time and I will defenetly read your next story. bye.

Reads alot like "Housework", with the almost uncomfortable looming of a RoyAl always in the background and the three of them going all family-like and stuff. I'm just thankful you stuck with RoyEd.

"two...boyfriends"

Awkwaaaard!

Congratulations honey!! You have finally finished writing this amazing fic of yours! The last chapters, especially the very end, were simply beautiful. You were able to cathe me in the beginning of you tale, and held my attention VERY well to the very end. The stoy was dynamic, unique, and intriguing, with just the rght touch of angst, humor, and especially romance to make it even more alluring. You have a unique talent that if you are not proud of alrady, you should be. I want to thank you for writing this story and sharing it with us, and for completing it. Many stories fall by the wayside, and the reader is left wondering... But your dedication is very well appreciated! I hope to see your talents again soon in another story! Thank you again!

darnit! this is the longest fic i ever read that i actually read! i loved it! it was sooo cute! T_T its over!

I agree with your assessment of Riza. I dont like Winry much either, except as a filler for Al.