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by TrulyWished

person Jazz
schedule September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*glomps trulywished* Your back!!! ^_^

*squeals like the rabid fangirl she is* Ed is soooo cute!!! ^_^ Awwweee!!!!

And your back!!! Yay!!!

I was about to go to bed when I decided to see if you updated and there was two chapters! Yay!!! ^_^
person Jazz
schedule September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwee poor Ed...

Id never be able to chose between my boyfriend and my little brother... Or... well in my case my bestfriends/sister-ishs people and my little sister... little sisters actually...

I'm surprised I dont have nightmares about choosing between the four of them... I think if I could only save one of them I'd die trying to save all four... Hmmm... *goes to write a story about that*

Oh before I go I agree that this chapter wasnt particularly happy... but it did show more of Ed's loyal personality... And poor Roy too... I am never going to war or anything like that... and you know what poor Riza too... ^_^;;; Although... if I was in that position Id be taking pictures for black mail purposes... hehehe... ^_^

Anywayz... I'm am going to write... or... go to bed... or something... I dunno...

~Jazz

P.S. I love your story!! Your an amazing writer... and I shall email you... eventually... hehehe... I know! I'll email you the next time I write something and maybe you can edit it for me?
person Jazz
schedule September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhhh Thanks for the P.S.

I get it now. ^_^

And he isnt freaking out about Al because...?

Is it because they're related?
person mirandler43
schedule September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't know why, but I'm a little confused. (But I'm having a really stupid day, so I'm not completely surprised...) Why is Ed acting so weird? I'm sure I'm just forgetting some detail about his condition, or that it will be explained next chapter.

I love your stories. I'm pretty new to the fanfic scene, and I just recently started reading FMA fics. I looked at your author's profile and realized that almost all of my favorites from this site were written by you! Random, yes, but I thought you might like to know...:)

I hope you return to us soon!
person Jazz
schedule September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwww. Roys such a sweetheart.

Ed's a lucky... cat-boy...

Now if only we could find a straight boy that sweet and cute in real life... hmmm...
person Jazz
schedule September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Why is Ed so upset? Hmmm...

Oh well I know how he feels with that whole he wants to stay but his instincts say no thing...

I dont really get why hes freaking out at Roy...

I guess hes upset which explains the no touching rule... but why is he freaking out about being at Roys house but not wanting to leave?
person milky
schedule September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, conflict! I like the fact that Ed and Roy are not going to have an easy time of it this time. What will happen next!?
person zoe
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
funny chapter, although I found Eds behaviour kind of unusual, was he mad at Roy because he wouldnt let Ed play with that girls plat? Hope that you update agin soon this has to be one of my current favrout storys.
person lelann
schedule August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love the fic! cat edward is so great! i liked how their mom kicked their dad out when she found out about the experiments, i always thought that she would be a really strong person. more soon, thanks for the fic so far!
person Lurker
schedule August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah! Roy spanking Ed one of my favorite things to read, thank you! And it was just cute how Ed was stuck in that tree.

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