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August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay... Well.. I havent reviewed to either of your stories that I've read (housework and chimera) mostly because I didnt know I could if I didnt have an account. Now that I know I can I shall review to every new chapter you post. ^_^
I loved Housework by the way... parts of it almost made me cry! *hugglez Edo-kun*
And this story of I love more! Kitty Ed is always fun... especially when hes ruled by hormones. Very amusing. Hehehe...
Once again I love your stories they're very well written and you do a good job of keeping the plot.
Keep up the good work!! ^_^
~Jazz (One of the many characters I've created)
P.S. Could you email me when you get the chance? Id like, if your willing, some pointers on keeping the plot. I do relatively good with oneshots... but I cant seem to keep the plot long enough to write a decent chapter story.
I can develop characters well enough... But my stories for some reason become plotless 2 or so chapters into them... Maybe I need to work on creating a solid plot in the first place... hmmm...
I loved Housework by the way... parts of it almost made me cry! *hugglez Edo-kun*
And this story of I love more! Kitty Ed is always fun... especially when hes ruled by hormones. Very amusing. Hehehe...
Once again I love your stories they're very well written and you do a good job of keeping the plot.
Keep up the good work!! ^_^
~Jazz (One of the many characters I've created)
P.S. Could you email me when you get the chance? Id like, if your willing, some pointers on keeping the plot. I do relatively good with oneshots... but I cant seem to keep the plot long enough to write a decent chapter story.
I can develop characters well enough... But my stories for some reason become plotless 2 or so chapters into them... Maybe I need to work on creating a solid plot in the first place... hmmm...
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August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg!omg!omg! I love this fic! Your a awsome writter and i hope u update soon! Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease update soon! I'll luv u 4-ever!
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August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mmm...I am drunk on both vodka and your fic right now, I have no idea if I can be coherent. But Ed being stuck up a tree is love, and Roy loving on both the Elrics is also love - again, I love how he's sort of their daddy too, it's sweet in a slightly squicky way - and the puzzle thing is great and yeah.
I wish I coul dencourage you better, I really do. Because you know, your writing has gotten honed so fast, I am envious, and I hope you keep writing in this fandom because you're seriously the reason I come to check affn. It is always nice to see someone taking an idea and having fun with it, and that is what you are doing here and it is wonderful.
I wish I coul dencourage you better, I really do. Because you know, your writing has gotten honed so fast, I am envious, and I hope you keep writing in this fandom because you're seriously the reason I come to check affn. It is always nice to see someone taking an idea and having fun with it, and that is what you are doing here and it is wonderful.
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August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...More?
Very cute stuff, here. I'm not usually into fluff, but this caught my attention and I couldn't stop reading! I want a kitty-Ed...
Very cute stuff, here. I'm not usually into fluff, but this caught my attention and I couldn't stop reading! I want a kitty-Ed...
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August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh Al bitched them out good. Wonderful story!
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August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very fun chapter cant wait to see more so plz update soon
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August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my my. Your lemons are always so good! As always I love your writing - it's smooth and polished. I check each morning for your updates and do a mental happy dance when I see you have. Thank you, thank you for taking your time to entertain constant reader with your stories.
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August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*_* So officially, mirrored masturbation = the new hottest thing ever.
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August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love! I am a fan of Ed arguing matter-of-factly with Al over this, and ROY being embarrassed about it. Also, this line had me in stitches:
"We won't get caught, I never get caught." His face reddened when both men stared at him, "Okay, so I don't usually get caught."
"We won't get caught, I never get caught." His face reddened when both men stared at him, "Okay, so I don't usually get caught."
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August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
MUAHAHAHA poor Roy. Great Chapter very very good, I cant wait for your next instalment so plz update soon