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It would seem that since I last came by to check your updates that the site now sorts categories. I love your stuff by the way.

Dammit, how in the HELL do you know all my kinks. Putting Al in PANTIES, for fuck's sake.

This continues to get hotter. <3

The bastard wanted his turn at playing rectum ranger with his younger brother.

That line was great as well as the one he mumbled when leaving Riza's presence... Roy is such a perv in this... me likes ^_^

Great Job

ZaKai,

I would like to commend you on not only Secret Arrangements, but all the stories you've post here, complete or otherwise. You have a unique writing style that I very much enjoy, and you are easily one of my favorite authors here on aff (to tell you the truth, I created this account with the sole purpose of sending reviews- I hope that doesn't sound too stalker-ish -_-;;). This story in particular is one of my personal favorites, though one would hope that the Colonel wouldn't be such a manipulative bastard in the midst of getting so much Elric tail :P Rectum ranger indeed. I hope you're planning on continuing Secret Arrangements, and I look forward to seeing more of your work posted soon.

Thanks for your time!
Andy ((faye_cullen@yahoo.com))

Wow... I love it. You have an extremely masculent way of writing. You don't sugar coat anything, and it's refreshing!

5/5! ^^ write more! PLEASE!

More more more plz!!!!!!!!! Delicious from the first word. Great job ^_^

Gods! Can it get any naughtier than this? It's so very Taboo!! Naughty, naughty! I love it though it's such a change! You never get a good and naughty but still sweet Al!

I am so glad to see more of this XD It's so dirty and shameless, but that's what makes it hot. Al having kinks, heh...I can see Al being the kinky one, and Ed being more vanilla, actually :) I like it.

Though I still want to know what they're going to do about bastard!Roy :D

Oh lordee that was hot... i don't know what else to say but wow.... i'm not sure i like the asshole roy but it's your interpretation of the fma world i'm just glad to read it *grin* thanks for the fun now i'm gonna go jump my Daddy and get my spanking

Ah! Another excellent chapter from one of my favorite authors! I grovel at your feet!! All hail ZaKai!! *throws confetti* :D Mmmmm! Nothing like some hot smexy Elricest to get the afternoon going just right! :) And, even better, there is a certain bastard colonel who's gonna get what coming to him all too soon!! *evil grin* sqwee!! I can't wait for that!!! I love Roy dearly but he's been a real jackass to Ed and Al and he deserves a little payback. And, as we all know, payback's a bitch so you better watch your ass Roy my love! LOL!! ;)
Update soon (I hope!)
Koneko =^.^=