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I was looking at the screen with gasp and a yea! I am really excited you posted this chapter. I am sorry however to hear about your car accident, I had one two weeks ago myself.

I do believe this chapter was important and not just a filler because it exposed Trowa's secret. I just cant wait for when Quatre finds out. Of course it probably wont matter when he does...anywho...I cant wait to find out who set them up. Oh and I loved how you portrayed Lady Une. Ummmmm I hope this is a happy review for you...keep up the writing and keep gettin' them A's in college.

Love your fic fan...LOL...
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For you not having liked that chapter, I think you wrote it very well. I enjoyed everything throughly, okay well I might enjoy seeing Trowa being so totally depressed, but the story and all of your wonderful details and insights to the beloved characters are truely wonderful. I can hardly wait for the next chapters. :D

yours truely

Blue

First off? I love this story. Sometimes I think I shouldn't read it since it's *very* emotionally intense for me, but I'm hooked. I salute you for being willing to write something many people would probably be repulsed by -- and what's more, for writing it well. Your portrayal of Trowa's gender dysphoria/revulsion for his body is bang-on for me (I'm trans myself, which is probably a large part of why I was *thrilled* to see this). This is original, with excellent characterization and good pacing... as I said, I'm hooked.

Just one thing -- do you have a beta-reader? Because there are some small punctuation errors here and there/some awkward or incorrect use of words -- not enough to put me off the story, just a small annoyance. If you don't have a beta-reader and want/need one, I'd be perfectly willing to help out. If you don't want/need one, well, like I said it doesn't detract very much from the story =D

Oh, and yes. Yes, I was crying at the end of chapter 6.

Well shit! hope life treats you better soon. No worries, I think everyone goes through that stage when they're a freshman. I know everyone in my dorm did.

This is a great chapter. I can't help feeling really badly for Trowa.

Of course, now they have solid proof to use against that bastard. I don't think that rape, assault, and terroristic acts fall under diplomatic immunity.

Whoa! I feel so bad for Trowa. Can't wait to see what happens next!

Oh my, poor Trowa and those damn hells. What is taking Duo and the others so long to get there? I hope Quatre is the one who takes care of that creep. Oh well, I love the story and cant wait until the next installment. Good luck with your papers for class, I know how they can get in the way of fun, but school comes first.

Luv your new biggest fan
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You my dear are a truely twisted freak. O.o

You make me cry a little emo tear from Trowa.

Continue the story please. :D

That was REALLY good. The attraction to the enemy, the surprise at being caught and the escape and then the climax... I think the my favorite part of Chapter 5 started the moment the bad guy smiled wickedly at Trowas small glance

Oh my wow, I am in love with your writing style and story plot. You have become one of my favorite writers. The way you describe scenes is outstanding. I hope I am blowing your head up, so you can put out the 5th chapter. I really love this story. I am just wondering if Quatre will somehow be at the club when Trowa gets there. Hmmmmm. Keep up the good work. Luv your new fan....8D

HOLY FUCKING HELL?! I really want to just like I dunno, but omg, this is an amazing story. I can hardly wait for the next chapter. I feel bad for Trowa and I kinda want to hurt Duo for being an ass. *huggles* Trowa. You're plot bunnies never stop amusing me.