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Interesting chapter. It was fun to see his transformation. Just as a side detail, maybe I missed it, but as part of the outfit she gave him, did she give him something to disguise his gender in a clingy skirt? And I know this may sound horrid since you more chapters done, but the story feels a tad bit rushed. I suppose I'd just like to hear more of broody, angst-filled Trowa (which you do well). My favorite part in this chapter was the moment between Quatre and him when he was tucking Quatre in. But the story has really picked up momentum, and Trowa has his plate filled. Moments like this for him seem a while in coming. Poor, poor Trowa :) Can't wait for the next part.

I love how much detail you put into these chapters. Draws you and really puts you in their shoes as it were. Keep it up!

Again, great portrayal of a bittersweet, complex Trowa. As a story mover, I'm not so sure about the area where they discuss the employment contract. I think something vague that just hints to cover everything would be more in line with letting Une give pretty much any job to any worker. But that's just me. Other than that, the chapter seemed to give the feel of a conclusion to a previous section and the beginning another section of his life. I can't wait to see what's in store for Trowa on his assignment.

yay another chapter congrats! that was a good ending point for the chapter, though i am curious about where all this is going, not to mention EXCITED!! i totally love lena's personality and i totally agree with the 'everyone can dance' thing.
keep up the good work, can't wait till the next chapter!

Courtney

One again I must impress upon you the lovelyness of your story. It's just so wonderful how you keep beating around the bush about Trowa's 'condition'. And this little twist in the Preventers world is jsut soooo cool. I can't wait for the next instalment. Thankyou for your brilliant idea! :D

I feel so bad for Trowa having to do the strip club.

And since when is that part of a contract legal!?

Keep up the good work!

That was an awsome and horrible cliffy! I was really gettin in to it. update soon, please...cause then me and my friends won't have huge arguments on whats gonna happen next. it's scary to see .... just imagine WW3...you get the picture
Great Job! keep it up
Courtney

The development of Trowa and his issues so far has been great. The story has pieces that hint at it being headed towards something really dark, but doesn't seem to go that far yet, more like a very morose grey. I can't wait for the next part and how all of this will be revealed to his housemates and impacts their relationships.

wow. This is something intriguing. I really would love to read more of this story. I love how you kept Trowa's secret from untill the very end. I definatly can't wait to see what other plot twists you come up with. :D

O_O holy shit! I didn't see that one coming! The length is fine, it's a complicated but good read which sucks you right into it.

I can't wait tos ee where this goes.